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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ sustainable-development-goals- covid-19-indian-economy-gdp- 7139070/ - In the intro, mention the importance of social sector development for the progress of the country.
- In the body, discuss various social sector areas which face problems like health, education, social safety, nutrition etc due to lack of infrastructure and funding. In the ways suggest increasing the investment in such areas in the creation of infrastructure for health and education, the continuation of schemes for providing electricity, cooking gas, etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to meet the various spending targets on various areas.
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Hi Saurabh
Good intro.
After the intro, give a proper heading.
You have written the bullets points about the vulnerability of the social sector , you can avoid this as you have written the challenges in the table.
Challenges and ways are discussed in a decent manner but try to mention more government schemes and initiatives .
You can also write about behavioral changes like in order to catalyse people’s participation for healthy India, there is need for Swasth Bharat Jan Andolan on lines of Swach Bharat Abhiyan.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords.
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