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- In the introduction explain the context of the question.
- In the body highlight the current scenario – discuss the Alabama human life protection act. Explain the salient features of the bill. Then move to discuss what are the ethical issues involved, debate the women rights of reproduction vs freedom to choose to live of the unborn.
- Conclude with a fair and balanced opinion.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Pro-life arguments are well explained.
In the pro-choice arguments, also write that many people and communities accept the fact that abortion is ethical and moral. In other communities, there are efforts to make them legal.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude that – without any doubt that abortion, from the discussed
issues is unethical and immoral after all they deprive someone of the right of living.
Your consistency in writing the answers is appreciable.
Keep working hard.
Thank you, sir. Sir, in this question what if I want to conclude otherwise i.e. Pro-abortion?
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Simply write the arguments for pro-choice and pro-life.
Do not write merits and demerits of both of the points, if you writing the demerits of pro-choice, it means that you are arguing for pro-life, so write crisp and concise.
Content is good but need to work on structure to get better marks.
Always conclude with some solution.
Your consistency in writing the answers is appreciable.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Sneha
Good introduction.
Arguments for pro-life and pro-choice are well explained.
In the conclusion, you have attempted to change the views of abortion by calling it ethical and emotional but the aspects of abortion are complex and in real sense obtained from the various aspects of the government or a given community. It is therefore true without any doubt that abortion, from the discussed issues is unethical and immoral after all they deprive someone of the right of living.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
I assume we are allowed to take our own stand on an ethical issues?
If abortion was clearly immoral, it wouldn’t be an ethical ‘issue’.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
After the introduction, discuss the Alabama human life protection act. Explain the salient features of the bill.
Your content is good but need to present it in a better way.
Give proper headings.
For example, write arguments for pro-life and pro-choice then conclude.
Good conclusion.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing.
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Hi Parakh
Try to complete your answer in maximum two pages, adhere to word limit.
Good introduction.
After the introduction, discuss the Alabama human life protection act. Explain the salient features of the bill.
Pro-life and pro-choice arguments are well explained.
You have discusses the ethical issues in a good manner, but there is no proper conclusion.
Conclude with a fair and balanced opinion.
Work on handwriting and space management.
Keep writing !
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
You have explained the pro-choice and pro-life arguments in a decent manner.
You have hold over the content , keep it up.
Concluding remarks are also good.
Thumbs up for the structure of the answer.
A decent attempt.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing, you will succeed.