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- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/privatisation-of- coal-sector-will-transform- indias-growth-trajectory- writes-amitabh-kant/2032424/ - In the intro, mention the government decision to open the sector to private sector.
- In the body mention the problems due to the restrictions in the sector. Next mention how the opening of the sector to private players could benefit the country-reduced import bill, increased production, technology, investment, employment etc.
- Conclude by mention the potential the decision will have on the overall economic outlook of the country.
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Hi Deepika
In the introduction, also quote some data like India is having the fifth largest reserves of Coal in the world. India is the second largest producer of coal with its record production at 729 million tonnes (MT) in 2019-20.
Reforms introduced by government are well explained.
Also write some challenges ahead like federal challenges, weak investment appetite, environmental challenges etc.
Way forward is decently explained.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
A good attempt.
Keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi Taran
Good introduction.
Give proper headings, write- ‘problems faced by coal sector’.
Do not write just bullet points, explain each of them briefly.’
And if you are writing bullet points then make a flow chart, it will save you space .
Write some concerns also, you can write for genuinely generating private interests, a considerable chunk of the valuable mines needs to be opened up. It is also important to ensure the integrity of the auction process and the checks needs to be placed to dissuade unviable bids.
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Good conclusion.
Work on sentence formation to get better marks.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Shubham
In the introduction, also quote some data like India is having the fifth largest reserves of Coal in the world.
You have made a flow chart titled problem faced due to restrictions first briefly explain these restrictions then write the problems.
Benefits of coal privatisation are well explained.
Write some concerns also, you can write for genuinely generating private interests, a considerable chunk of the valuable mines needs to be opened up. It is also important to ensure the integrity of the auction process and the checks needs to be placed to dissuade unviable bids.
Summarise your conclusion.
Work on space management so that you can add more content in the given word limit.
Keep writing !
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Briefly explain why there was a need for privatisation of coal mining, you can write that despite an aggressive push for renewable and nuclear sources, India has a high dependence on coal for power generation.
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
Give proper headings, ‘Instruments’ of what?
The content is good but need to present it in a better form, work on headings and subheadings .
Write some concerns also, you can write for genuinely generating private interests, a considerable chunk of the valuable mines needs to be opened up. It is also important to ensure the integrity of the auction process and the checks needs to be placed to dissuade unviable bids.
Stick to the demand of the question, do not write points like coal gasification etc.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Keep writing !
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Hi Sneha
Good introduction but need to summarise it.
Briefly explain why there was a need for privatisation of coal mining, you can write that despite an aggressive push for renewable and nuclear sources, India has a high dependence on coal for power generation.
Expected benefits are well explained.
Try to explain each point in one or two lines.
Way forward is decently written.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by mention the potential the decision will have on the overall economic outlook of the country.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Write your introduction in one paragraph only.
Briefly explain why there was a need for privatisation of coal mining, you can write that despite an aggressive push for renewable and nuclear sources, India has a high dependence on coal for power generation.
Try to give subheadings for better presentation of your answer.
Write small headings not of two lines.
Content is good but need to work on presentation for better marks.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi Unnati
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is appreciable but make it little neat.
Also quote some data like India is having the fifth largest reserves of Coal in the world. India is the second largest producer of coal with its record production at 729 million tonnes (MT) in 2019-20.
Try to explain each point in one or two lines.
Leave proper space between the lines and after paragraphs.
Advantages of coal privatisation are well explained.
Way forward and conclusion are well written.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Content is good but need to work on presentation to fetch better marks.
Keep writing !
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
Issues are well explained.
Add these also in announced reforms-
-Coal gasification/liquefaction to be incentivised through rebate in revenue share.
-Coal bed methane (CBM) extraction rights to be auctioned from Coal India’s coal mines.
You have explained the intended benefits in a comprehensive manner.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep working hard !