Mentor’s Comments-
- Discuss the issue of rapid urbanisation and urban sprawl in India.
- Discuss the associated problems of urban sprawl.
- Suggest measures to manage urban growth and sprawls in the future.
No. 1 UPSC IAS Platform for preparation
Mentor’s Comments-
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Muskan,
Good attempt. The demand of the question is met. Introduction is good. Good that you have mentioned about government schemes like AMRUT. All the points that you have mentioned are relevant. Try to substantiate those points with examples from some of the states in India. You can mention about vision of NITI Aayog on urbanization. You can also talk about global best practices of urbanization. Overall a satisfactory answer.
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Arpita,
Good attempt. All the parts of the question has been answered. All the points mentioned by you are relevant. You have mentioned several diverse points from different dimensions. However try to substantiate with examples. Do mention government schemes and initiatives taken regarding this. You can talk about global best practices in the way forward. Overall a decent answer.
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Siddharth,
Good attempt. The demand of the question is met. Points mentioned by you are relevant. But try to substantiate with examples. Mention some of the government schemes. You can mention about global best practices and vision of NITI Aayog regarding this. Overall a good answer.
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Bh Rpalli,
Very good answer. All the points are relevant. the demand of the question is properly met. You have mentioned many diverse points. Good that you have talked about various government schemes. To add more value you can mention about NITI Aayog’s vision. You can also mention about global world practices. Overall a very good answer.
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Anshuman,
Good attempt. The demand of the question is met. All the points mentioned by you are relevant. however substantiate with examples. Good that you have talked about government schemes. You can add more value to answer by mentioning about global best practices and vision of NITI Aayog. Overall a good answer.
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Nandhini,
Good attempt. All the points mentioned by you are relevant. However substantiate with examples. Do mention about government schemes. To add more values to answer, talk about NITI Aayog’s vision, global best practices and SDG. Structure and flow is good.
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