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- In the introduction give some data about the composition of population in India.
- In the body, first list down some challenges faced by the ageing population.
- Mention some schemes of the government for ageing population
- Write a way forward.
- Conclude accordingly.
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Bh Rpalli,
Good answer. The demand of the question is properly met. All the points mentioned are relevant. You can add one more dimension of increasing digitization and its effect on elderly. You can also mention about increasing trend of nuclear family. Good use of government schemes in your answer. Overall it is a good answer.
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Arpita,
Good answer. All the points mentioned are relevant. The demand of the question has been met. In the government schemes part, write 1-2 lines explaining what these schemes does and how it addresses elderly population’s concern. You can also mention the effects of digitization on elderly population. Overall a complete answer.
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Siddharth,
Good answer. The demand of the question is met. All the points mentioned are relevant. You should also talk about impact of increasing trend of Nuclear family, Effect of digitization on elderly population and steps required in these direction. Mention some of the government schemes. Overall a good answer.
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Ashok,
Good attempt. All the parts of the question has been answered. the points mentioned by you are relevant. Also talk about digitization and its impact on elderly. Mention some of the prominent government schemes. Overall a good answer.
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Saran,
Good answer. All the parts of the question has been answered. Also mention about challenges associated with digitization, probable future pandemic, increasing trend of nuclear family. Mention about government schemes undertaken. Overall a decent answer.
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Muskan,
Good attempt. All the parts of the question has been answered. Many diverse points have been mentioned which makes the answer more holistic. Also mention about modern and upcoming challenges like Digitization, increasing urbanization, increasing trend of nuclear family. Do mention government schemes undertaken under this direction. You can give examples from foreign nations who have handled such challenge in a better way. Overall a good answer.
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Nandhini,
Good answer. Good that you have mentioned about government schemes. However write 1-2 lines explaining what these schemes are meant for and how it will help handle elderly population challenges. All the parts of the question has been answered. Also corelate with future challenges like digitization and increasing urbanization. Suggest measures related to such challenges as well. Overall a decent answer.
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