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- In the introduction, briefly discuss civil society.
- Explain how civil societies help in the democratization of Governance- Mention points such as to empower citizens, to keep state power in check, to promote democratic values etc.
- Discuss the challenges of civil societies such as promoting private petty interests, lack of internal democracy, inadequate representation etc.
- Conclude suitably.
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Define civil society in introduction, it will be better than writing abstract statements.
Points mentioned in the next part are good, you have mentioned most points..examples are also nice.
It will be good if you can mention some challenges too, will make the answer holistic- promoting private petty interests, lack of internal democracy, inadequate representation etc.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
4.5/10
Please check my answer, it’s my first time answer writing
Overall good attempt.
Please look into the following observations:
a. Give a proper picture of the central theme of the question in INTRODUCTION.
b. Utilise flow chart effectively (wastage of space in the answer sheet should be avoided).
c. Avoid scribbling (a neat and clean answer is sought).
d. The handwriting should follow a straight line (it will come with practice).
Keep up the hard work 👏
Ayasha
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Coming to the answer, use 2 pages for 10 marker answers. Your content is good, concepts are fine. Give spaces between subheadings, that will be fine if you use 2 pages.
Intro is good, in role in democracy you can add points like role in educating citizens, making them aware of their rights. Try to give examples like Bachpan Bachao Andolan of Kailash Satyarthi, social movements led by civil society like Narmada Bachao Andolan.
Challenges mentioned are good, way forward and conclusion are fine too.
Keep writing consistently and you will be up there. 🙂
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Rasmita
Nice attempt. Good content, your concepts are good. Introduction is fine. Give subheading for the next part, points are good. Good use of diagram too.
Examples are nice. Give some more space to challenges part too. You can mention that it can get biased towards private interests in the absence of proper representation. Conclusion is fine.
Keep it up. 🙂
Q.1 “Civil society helps in the democratization of our social life which in turn helps to sustain a democratic system of governance”. Analyze. (10 Marks)
Q.1 “Civil society helps in the democratization of our social life which in turn helps to sustain a democratic system of governance”. Analyze. (10 Marks)
Ayush
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Your answer is good, introduction and conclusion are fine. Content is also good..you can give some more examples of successful civil society movements like India against corruption, Bachpan Bachao Andolan etc
Challenges mentioned are also good, you can use flowchart to incorporate more points like inadequate representation of all communities in the absence of internal democracy, sometimes they promote private interests etc
Keep writing, overall nice attempt. 🙂
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Manali
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Answer is nice. Introduction is good. Content is also fine. Examples are also mentioned. In 2nd part you can mention some more points- like role in educating citizens, making them aware of their rights, role in women empowerment and raising issues of minorities, LGBT community etc..try to make the answer more diverse by including various angles.
Challenges mentioned are good.
Conclusion is fine. Keep it up and keep writing. 🙂
5.5/10
I don’t have a reference ID. it is mentioned in the DAILY AWE description that people who donot pay for reviews, there answers will get checked little late. I am fine with that.
But My second answer is not checked.
I am assuming this initiative is also free of cost and open to all. Or is payment mandatory?
Q.1 “Civil society helps in the democratization of our social life which in turn helps to sustain a democratic system of governance”. Analyze. (10 Marks)
Sunny
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Answer is nice, good intro. Use of diagram also good. Use pointwise format to include more content in role of civil society. Use examples like India against corruption, Bachpan Bachao Andolan etc. Also talk about their role in educating citizens, making them aware of their rights, role in women empowerment, raising minority and LGBT issues etc
Challenges part is well written.
Conclusion can be kept shorter. Include more points in the body rather than making intro-conclusion longer.
Keep writing 🙂
4.5/10