Mentor’s Comments-
- In the introduction, write down about the formation of Bangladesh and the context leading to it.
- In the body, mention the reasons that prompted India to intervene such as large scale genocide, refugee influx in India, atrocities on minorities, strategic calculations etc.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Nandhini
Introduction is fine, however you can mention the context a bit before the 1971 war- refusal by Pakistan to accept electoral results, formation of Mukti Vahini, genocide committed by Pak, leadership of Sheikh Mujibur Rehman etc
Then mention the reasons and impacts.
You have written these sections well. Most points are covered.
China’s influence is a recent phenomenon however, you can avoid that instead mention US support to Pak.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂