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- Describe the evolution of a divergent boundary which leads to the formation of rift valleys.
- Try to make use of diagrams.
- Discuss the case of the Great Rift Valley system along with explaining its features.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Siddharth,
Good answer. You have made very good use of diagrams. The points mentioned are as per the demand of the question. However, rift valley formation needs to be explained in context of Great Rift Valley. You have described general rift valley formation. Structure and flow is good.
Keep writing.
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Debajyoti,
Nice attempt. Good that you have taken help of diagrams to explain the formation of Rift Valley. However you should have explained the formation of Rift Valley in the context of Great Rift Valley. To add more value you could have named the plates that form Great Rift Valley. Other major points are covered in your answer.
Keep writing.
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Indrajeet,
Nice attempt. Introduction is very good. You should have explained the formation of Rift Valley in the context of Great Rift Valley. Good that you have taken help of diagrams to explain the formation of Rift Valley. To add more value you could have named the plates that form Great Rift Valley. Other major points are covered in your answer.
Keep writing.