Mentor’s Comments-
- In the introduction, write about food processing industries and their overall contribution to Indian economy.
- In the body, list down the factors responsible for growth of these industries in north west India.
- Also mention some initiatives taken by the government in this regard.
- Conclude with a positive outlook.
Q.1 Discuss the factors for localisation of agro-based food processing industries of North-West India.(10 Marks)
Good answer
Sunny
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Overall your answer is nice. Intro can be kept a bit concise, you can start with north-west India directly. Good if you can draw a small map of north-west India.
Points mentioned in factors are nice, presence of markets can also be mentioned.
Government policies are also mentioned which is good.
Further, you can mention some challenges to- very briefly- use flowchart if short of space.
You can mention small scale of food processing, lack of implementation of policies, politics over establishment of food parks etc
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
Q.1 Discuss the factors for localisation of agro-based food processing industries of North-West India.(10 Marks)
Good answer buddy
Ayush
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Coming to your answer, nowhere in your answer north-west India is mentioned. Keep the intro concise, it is too long- you can skip the first line together- direct come to agro-based food processing in NW India- can draw a map of that region for extra points.
Reasons mentioned are fine but again mention north-west India regions, also present of market point is missing you can mention proximity to Delhi NCR, name the industrial corridor passing through the region, link raw material productivity with green revolution.
Govt policies are fine- 1 line elaboration can be done.
Further, you can mention some challenges to- very briefly- use flowchart if short of space.
You can mention small scale of food processing, lack of implementation of policies, politics over establishment of food parks etc
Again conclusion is too long, keep intro-conclusion short and catchy- focus more on the content.
Keep writing. 🙂
Id0000486418
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Decent attempt. Introduction is fine, you can draw a small map showing north-west India for extra points.
Reasons mentioned are also good, raw material, logistics, industrial corridors, availability of manpower etc are good points.. also mention proximity to Derlhi NCR- availability of markets. Also mention all policy measures under one head- SAMPADA, mega food parks, Krishonnati Yojana, FDI, technology-aid etc
Govt policies are fine- 1 line elaboration can be done.
Further, you can mention some challenges to- very briefly- use flowchart if short of space.
You can mention small scale of food processing, small and marginal farmers, lack of implementation of policies, politics over establishment of food parks etc
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂