Mentor’s Comments-
- In the introduction, mention about the population growth in India and the pressure on resources it creates.
- In the body, mention some causes of poulation growth and link it with poor condition of women. After that, state how empowering women can play a crucial role in controlling the population growth.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to solve the problem of overpopulation.
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Sehaj,
Nice attempt.
But the answer is very generic.
Discuss the current context like population control Bills in UP.
Try to give examples of other nations how empowerment of women led to population control there.
Also discuss problems with coercive measures to control population.
Keep writing.
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Muskan,
Nice attempt.
You have fair idea of the topic.
Points mentioned are relevant.
However discuss the present context like UP Population control bill.
Support with examples from other countries how empowering women there led to population control.
Also give examples from Indian states like Kerala.
Overall good answer.
Keep writing.
Sir please review.