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- Give a brief introduction about wetlands.
- Highlight the ecological services provided by wetlands.
- Give the reasons behind their decline.
- Mention the steps that have been taken by the government to protect wetlands.
- Give a brief conclusion.
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Apurva
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Attempt is very good, comprehensive content along with neat and clean presentation.
Introduction is good, ecosystem services provided are also written well. Nice use of flowchart. You can also mention their role in ground water replenishment and water purification (presence of biofilters, hydrophytes and organisms that have the capacity to remove toxic substances).
Next part could be divided into 2 parts- anthropogenic causes and natural causes. You have mentioned most anthropogenic causes.. In natural causes, subsidence due to sea level rise, earthquakes, drought, hurricane etc could be mentioned.
Government initiatives are also written, however, Ramsar convention which provides a framework for national action and international cooperation could be talked about.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Chandan
Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine, you can add that it is transitional ecosystem between terrestrial and aquatic.
Good point have been mentioned in services provided by wetlands.. Flood control, nutrient retention and role in climate change mitigation and adaptation can also be mentioned.
Next part could be divided into 2 parts- anthropogenic causes and natural causes. In natural causes, subsidence due to sea level rise, earthquakes, drought, hurricane etc could be mentioned.
In govt. initiatives you could mention the domestic laws and rules.. Wetland conservation and management rules, 2017; national wetlands conservation programme and legislations like EPA, 1986. Ramsar convention is good.
Add a conclusion.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Deepti
In introduction, after 1st line, you could briefly define wetlands or just mention that it is the transitional area between terrestrial and aquatic ecosystems.
Points mentioned in next part are good, role in climate change adaptation and mitigation could be mentioned here.. Role in nutrient retention and water purification (presence of biofilters, hydrophytes and organisms that have the capacity to remove toxic substances) could be added.
Next part could be divided into 2 parts- anthropogenic causes and natural causes. You have mentioned most anthropogenic causes.. In natural causes, subsidence due to sea level rise, earthquakes, drought, hurricane etc could be mentioned.
In govt. initiatives you could mention the recent Wetland conservation and management rules, 2017 and legislations like EPA, 1986. Others are fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Introduction is fine.
Services provided by wetlands are also mentioned. Role in nutrient retention and water purification (presence of biofilters, hydrophytes and organisms that have the capacity to remove toxic substances) could be added.
Next part could be divided into 2 parts- anthropogenic causes and natural causes. You have mentioned most anthropogenic causes.. In natural causes, subsidence due to sea level rise, earthquakes, drought, hurricane etc could be mentioned.
In govt. initiatives you could mention the recent Wetland conservation and management rules, 2017; National wetland conservation programme and legislations like EPA, 1986. Others are fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Naveen
Good attempt; both the content and presentation are fine.
Introduction is good, services are also listed out.
Next part could be divided into 2 parts- anthropogenic causes and natural causes. In natural causes, subsidence due to sea level rise, earthquakes, drought, hurricane etc could be mentioned.
Govt initiatives are also written, legislations like EPA 1986 could also be talked about.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Sushant
Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine.
In services, points are good although you could talk a bit about groundwater replenishment, nutrient retention and presence of biofilters, hydrophytes and organisms that have the capacity to remove toxic substances and aid in purification.
Next part could be divided into 2 parts- anthropogenic causes and natural causes. In natural causes, subsidence due to sea level rise, earthquakes, drought, hurricane etc could be mentioned.
Govt initiatives are also written, legislations like EPA 1986 could also be talked about.
Keep practicing. 🙂