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In the introduction,explain the consolidation process after independence. Mention various commissions formed to look into linguistic reorganization of states.
In the body, mention the significance of linguistic states and how it strengthened Indian unity. Also, explain also the various challenges involved.
Conclude with a way forward.
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Sehaj,
Nice attempt.
Good that you have discussed the history of linguistic formation of states including various committees. This makes the answer holistic.
Apart from advantages and challenges, also discuss how it promotes national unity.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing.