Mentor’s Comments-
- Briefly discuss the potential of the tourism industry in India.
- Discuss the potential of eco-tourism and highlight the principle to harness this potential.
- Write about the challenges faced in realizing potential of eco-tourism.
- Write about the steps taken by the government.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Debajyoti,
Good attempt. However the third part of the question is not properly answered. Elaborate the steps taken by government in detail. Also mention specifically how eco-tourism will help Indian tourism. Substantiate the benefits of eco-tourism in Indian context. Other points mentioned by you are relevant and as per demand of the question. Structure and flow is good.
Keep writing.
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Muskan,
Very good answer. You have given many diverse points covering all the major dimensions. Introduction is good and related to present context. All the parts of the question has been answered. The points mentioned by you are relevant and as per the demand of the question. Conclusion can be more futuristic.
Keep writing.
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Siddharth,
Good answer. Introduction is good. Starting an answer with data is a value addition. All the parts of the question has been answered. The points mentioned by you are relevant and the demand of the question is met. In addition to challenges, mention briefly concerns associated with the development of Eco-Tourism in India.
Keep writing.