Mentor’s Comments-
In the introduction, briefly mention about the socio-religious movements which led to restructuring of the Indian society along modern lines.
In the body, mention the impact of socio-religious movements on the emancipation of women in the 19th century with relevant examples such as abolition of sati, child marriage, female infanticide, widow remarriage, impact on education etc
Conclude by mentioning how ideas of the movement resulted in formation of various women’s organizations even afterwards.
Plz review my first answer
Udit,
Nice attempt. Good try at covering all the major demands of the question.
The content needs to be more.
Role of Raja Ram Mohan Roy in making sati illegal.
Role of Ishwar Chandra Vidyasagar in women’s education.
Make the answer more diverse by covering contribution from Parsi reforms and role played by freedom fighters.
Trey to include examples of role models who reflect women empowerment at that time.
Overall nice attempt.
Keep writing.