Mentor’s Comments-
- Briefly highlight upon the violent phase in Punjab during 1980s.
- Discuss the reasons for rise and insurgency and violence such as reorganisation of Punjab, Anandpur Sahib resolution, Khalistan movement, Anti-Sikh riots, communal politics etc
- State the steps taken by the government to quell the violence- imposition of AFSPA, Operation Blue Star, Punjab Accord etc
- Conclude on the basis of above points.
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Bhanu
Decent attempt, your content is good..too much focus on Bhindranwale though..talk about Khalistan and communal movement as one of the reasons and move on..you can also mention things like economic crisis, migrants entering Punjab, also talk about reorganisation of the state which led to border disputes in more detail, there you can also mention about distribution of river waters of Satluj, Ravi and Beas (Punjab got only 23% which created resentment among farmers).
Other points are good in causes, try to cover more dimensions and consolidate content related to one issue under one point.
Government response part is fine, Operation Blue Star, Black Thunder should be mentioned in this part. Also , mention some provisions of Punjab Accord, instrumental in bringing peace. In 15 markers, some details will be expected.
Intro and conclusion are fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂