Mentor’s Comments-
- In introduction, briefly state what do you understand by the Gandhian phase of national movement.
- In the body, discuss the role of various leaders and their movements during the Gandhian phase.
- You can talk about the Khilafat movement, role of Swarajists and No-changers, role of socialist leaders, role of revolutionaries, role of women leaders etc
- Conclude appropriately.
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Siddharth
Nice attempt; introduction is good. You have classified different sections of freedom fighters that is also good.. mention about role of women freedom fighters too- will make the answer more diverse.
Also role of Khilafat movement in Hindu-Muslim unity and its leaders can be mentioned. While mentioning about Swarajists and no-changers, mention the difference in their approach- entering the legislatures vs constructive work.
Other points mentioned are quite good.
Keep writing. 🙂
6.5/10
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Nandhini
Nice answer. You have covered multiple points. Introduction is good. Good use of flowchart also.
Also, better than the term rebels, use the word revolutionaries- you can mention some of their achievements too other than Subhas Bose’s INA. Also, briefly, role of communist leaders and contribution of Indian capitalists to the national cause can be mentioned.
Conclusion is good.
Overall, very good attempt.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Muskan
Use 3 pages for writing 15-marker answers; otherwise it becomes quite congested. Intro is good but mention the timeline of the Gandhian phase.
Role of freedom fighters’ part is good. You have covered multiple dimensions especially women leaders, minority leaders etc.. Role of revolutionaries can be elaborated a bit- can mention some of their major achievements, also mention movements like NCM, CDM(Dandi March) and its important leaders briefly.
Overall, the answer is well- written..give space and present in a neat and clean manner.
Keep writing. 🙂
7.5/15
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