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Introduction-
Write about the uprising in brief.
Body-
Write various factors that may be assigned to the Rangpur uprising of 1783.
In next Section bring out significance of the uprising in exposing evils of foreign rule.
Conclusion-
Conclude by the Important role played by peasants movements as whole or by impact of Rangpur uprising on colonial rule.
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Utkarsha,
Introduction is well articulated.
You have Written a good both Sections are covered well.
In Factors you must also point out system of Ijardari was not in favour of Ijardars also. They faced perpetual threat of loosing their state in case of failure of revenue payments to the Govt. Quote names of leaders or cruel Ijardars like Debi Singh
In Conclusion in would be better if you write it Rangpur rebellion centric how it set course for various other rebellions.
Prepare on the same line such other important movements.
Keep writing:)
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Sonal,
Your Introduction is way too long. You have taken almost a whole page for it.
You have breached the word limit. 10-20 words more or less the prescribed limit is fine but you have way too much. Mind the word limit.
Except that you have Written a very good answer. Content, structure, presentation and arrangement of the argument is very good.
Prepare on the same line such other important movements.
Keep Practicing 🙂
5.5/10
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Sumita,
You have Written a very long Introduction.
Also you have breached the word limit. 10-20 words more or less the prescribed limit is fine but you have way too much.
You the content and knowledge but you need to work upon concise your arguments. Be very specific. For example in Introduction rather then giving whole back ground start directly with writing about the Rangpur Rebellion.
Avoid factual errors like Diwani rights which British got after treaty of Allahabad 1764, not 1757.
In Factors you must also point out system of Ijardari was not in favour of Ijardars also. They faced perpetual threat of loosing their state in case of failure of revenue payments to the Govt.
Conclusion is well Written. Prepare on the same line such other important movements.
Keep Practicing 🙂
4.5/10
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Ankita ,
Your Introduction and Conclusion both are very well articulated.
Overall you have Written a good answer. Structure, presentation and arrangement of Argument is also good.
I have pointed out this earlier as well that you should not write what’sapp spellings of words like you did for System (sym). It doesn’t look good.
Prepare on the same line such other important movements. Keep writing 🙂
5.5/10
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Kartikey ,
Your Introduction is good. But you can write better Conclusion by making in Rebellion centric, by point out impact of Rebellion as motivating force for future events.
Factors section is written very well.
Quote some important name like Dhiraj Narayan, Warren Hastings, Debi Singh so to add Value in your answer.
In the next section you should also bring out the fact of unity among peasants cutting across the religions.
Rest is fine. Prepare on the same line such other important movements. Keep writing 🙂
4.5/10
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