Mentor’s Comments-
- Discuss various demands for autonomy, movements for secession, and opposition to outsiders in N-E region.
- Briefly discuss the reasons for the above phenomenon.
- Mention a way forward and give a suitable conclusion.
No. 1 UPSC IAS Platform for preparation
Mentor’s Comments-
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Muskan
Decent attempt but core part of the question can be tackled a bit better.
This is a 15 marker, so some elaboration on various movements in north-east will be expected.
Intro is fine.
After that in next part, you can trace some of the major insurgent movements statewise, especially those in Assam, Nagaland, Mizoram and Tripura.
Current position related to these movements can also be mentioned.
Causes can be kept a bit concise, you can use flowchart for this part.
Integrate way forward with some of the initiatives govt has taken to bring peace in the region(dialogue process development initiatives, providing certain degree of autonomy etc)
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Nandhini
Good attempt.
Introduction is good.
In next part, you can trace the major insurgent movements statewise especially those of Assam, Nagaland, Mizoram, Tripura.
Some elaboration will be expected in this part.
Cause are well explained. You have covered multiple points. Try to make it a bit concise.
Government initiatives are also fine, however you can mention current progress regarding the major insurgent movements, reduction in violence etc
Way forward and conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂