Mentor’s Comments-
- Start by defining globalisation.
- In the body, list down some of the factors of globalisation.
- Mention that Covid-19 has initiated the process of deglobalisation and write down some reasons.
- Mention a way forward.
- Conclude by saying all is not dull and dark and we might see a different form of globalisation evolving.
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Siddharth
Intro is fine..you can begin by defining globalisation too..then move on to deglobalisation.
After that don’t limit deglobalisation to Covid 19…mention it as one of the reasons..the process is say to have started before the pandemic- as seen from things like protectionism, trade wars, politically rival blocs (china-russia, quad etc), strict immigration policies, no proper agreement on climate finance etc. Incorporate these points in the answer.
Points about Covid 19 are good.
Drivers of globalisation part is well-written.
Before concluding mention a brief way forward- we still need globalisation to tackle multiple transnational issues like terrorism, climate change, big tech etc. Also rather than deglobalisation, this might be a different form of globalisation which is emerging.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Muskan
Introduction is good. After that don’t limit deglobalisation to Covid 19…mention it as one of the reasons..the process is said to have started before the pandemic- as seen from things like protectionism, trade wars, politically rival blocs (china-russia, quad etc), strict immigration policies, no proper agreement on climate finance etc. Incorporate these points in the answer.
Points about Covid 19 are fine, include vaccine nationalism.
Drivers of globalisation part is fine; rise of multinational companies and global trading blocs can also be mentioned.
Also mention a brief way forward- new forms of international and regional integration should be promoted; culture of tolerance and understanding must be promoted; focus should be on creating organizations/coalition like International Solar Alliance, Coalition for Disaster Resilient Infrastructure that contribute to global sustainable
development along with promoting coordination among nations as we need solutions to controlling climate change, taxation of global companies, tackling terrorism, sharing vaccines etc
Keep writing. 🙂