Mentor’s Comments-
- Introduce by defining globalization.
- In the body, discuss how globalization has shaped modern economies.
- Separately mention impact of globalization on family structure and marriage systems.
- Conclude by describing the impact of market forces on Indian society as a social churn.
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Decent attempt overall.
Introduction concept is good but the definition can be better, you can talk about interconnectedness. What you have written makes globalization look like just foreign trade.
Next part about the impact on economy is a bit long, this is not the major thing that is asked, cryptocurrency, bullion market, India-related measures can be avoided, you can just talk about enhanced economic growth on the back of globalization, FDI, trade etc are fine points that you have mentioned.
In next two parts, you have done good use of flowcharts…in structure of family, you can talk about fewer children due to awareness about family planning, rising costs; role of women has also changed from housewife to co-breadwinner. Other points are fine, filiocentric families could be explained a bit.
Impact on marriage part is fine, short explanations could be added.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Good attempt.
Introduction is good, impact on economy is also well written.
In impact on family structure, you could also mention about fewer children due to awareness about family planning, rising costs; changed role of women from housewife to co-breadwinner. Filiocentric society could be explained.
Impact on marriage is also decent. Gradual replacement of traditional arranged-marriage system with marriages based on mutual consent due to increasing individual freedoms can be mentioned too.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂