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- In introduction, write about some women’s organisations in the pre-independence era during the social reform movement.
- In the body, mention some women’s issues during pre-independence era.
- Then, mention few points about the progress achieved on these issues after independence.
- After that write about how some of the challenges still remain albeit in different forms.
- Write a brief way forward.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Siddharth,
Nice attempt. All the parts of the question has been answered. Introduction is good. However try to include contemporary issues like Sabrimala Issue, Triple Talak issue and dowry. Also discuss some of the government steps taken like Beti Bachao Beti Padhao, need for behavioral change. You can mention the name of some of the female activists. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.
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Anshuman,
Nice attempt. Introduction is good. All the parts of the question has been answered. Good that you mentioned about Gender Inequality Index. However try to include contemporary issues like Sabrimala Issue, Triple Talak issue and dowry. Also discuss some of the government steps taken like Beti Bachao Beti Padhao, need for behavioral change. You can mention the name of some of the female activists. Overall a good answer.
Keep practicing.
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Arpita,
Very good answer. All the demands of the question is properly met. Mention of contemporary issues like Sabrimala Issue and Triple Talak is value addition. Discuss some of the government steps taken like Beti Bachao Beti Padhao, need for behavioral change. You can mention the name of some of the female activists. Overall a holistic answer.
Keep writing.
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Muskan,
Very good answer. All the demands of the question is properly met. Try to mention some of the contemporary issues like Sabrimala Issue and Triple Talak. Good that you have mentioned about government steps taken and need for behavioral change. You can mention the name of some of the female activists. You have covered diverse dimensions which is very good. Overall a holistic answer.
Keep writing.