Mentor’s Comments-
- Start by writing about the new awakening among some enlightened section of Indian society.
- Mention some of the examples of socio-religious reform movements.
- Conclude appropriately – one can also highlight the difference in methods adopted in such movements in brief.
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Karun
Nice attempt.
Good introduction, content is also fine.
You can mention the foundation years of the movements mentioned for better impact.
Before talking about revivalist movements, you can in one line talk about the difference in reformist and revivalist movements.
Overall, you have written well. Not much changes required.
Keep practicing.🙂