Mentor’s Comments-
- Write a brief introduction on the tribal movements in the 19th century.
- Bring out the prominent causes behind these recurring tribal movements.
- Discuss the limitations of these uprisings.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Chandan
Decent attempt. Structure of your answer is good, content is also okay.
Intro is good, flowchart is okay but it takes a lot of space, you can mention examples in just one line and move on..
Causes mentioned are fine, you can also talk about resentment against Christian missionaries and government’s attempt to control forest lands by passing various acts due to increasing demand for goods.. Influx of non-tribals in tribal areas who took the land of the tribals and taxes on the customary use of timber, grazing facilities etc can also be mentioned.
Limitations mentioned are also fine, absence of pan-India tribal movement and lack of charismatic leaders can also be mentioned.
Conclusion is okay, keep practicing. 🙂
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Pranav
Decent attempt, both the content and structure are fine.
Intro is good.
Causes mentioned are okay, imposition of land revenue settlement, influx of non-tribals in tribal areas and land-grabbing, imposition of taxes on the customary use of timber, grazing facilities and restrictions on shifting cultivation could also be added as some important causes.
Limitations are also fine, absence of a pan-India movement and their inability to integrate with the national movement could also be talked about.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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You have started mentioning causes in the introduction itself, keep it for later, you can just mention the time and space of tribal movements in the intro along with few examples and move on.
In causes, imposition of land revenue settlement, influx of non-tribals in tribal areas and land-grabbing, imposition of taxes on the customary use of timber, grazing facilities etc, resentment against Christian missionaries, restrictions on shifting cultivation etc should be mentioned; some of the points are missing.
Limitations and conclusion part are fine.
Keep practicing. Read some more about the topic. 🙂