Mentor’s Comments-
- Briefly introduce First World War and its consequences.
- Elaborate on socio-economic impacts on India such as scarcity of commodities, inflation, increase in defense expenditure, forced recruitments etc
- Elaborate on political impacts on India that is impact on freedom struggle and its changed nature.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Intro is fine, political effects you have mentioned well..especially related to national movement…however mention that the British didn’t fulfill their wartime promises..led to dissatisfaction among Indian masses.
Also, Simon Commission as an impact of WW1 is a bit far-fetched. Mention about 1919 Montague-Chelmsford act which didn’t stand up to the expectations. Other points are okay..try to present neatly.
Socio-economic impacts you have missed- scarcity of commodities, inflation, increase in defense expenditure of India, forced recruitments of native Indians during wartime etc
Write a more balanced conclusion..world wars can’t be said to be beneficial..India suffered losses too.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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