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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/india- uk-ties-technology-7671433/ - In the intro, mention the time tested relations between the two countries with shared past.
- In the body mention the salience of the United Kingdom in geopolitics, trade and economics, technology, security domain and how India can gain in various areas. In the next part, highlight the possibilities in the domain of technology.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for Delhi to recognise the enormous strategic possibilities with Britain and invest political capital to build on those synergies.
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Rohit
Very generic answer, you can write this answer for any country not only Britain. Try to be a bit more specific.
In intro, cultural can be avoided, you can mention about British rule.
After that mention a section about post-Brexit Britain- its economy, technological prowess,innovation capacity, search for more partners etc
After that you can come to areas of cooperation- mention some figures about trade, Britain’s position in UN from which India can advantage. Other points mentioned by you are fine, especially diaspora, FTA etc
Conclusion is fine, some present challenges in the relationship can also be mentioned along with ways to solve them.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Bhanu
Decent attempt. Intro-conclusion are good.
In the body, while points under Britain’s interests are fine, first mention some strong areas of the country which provides it with an opportunity for better ties..For example, technology, innovation, parliamentary democracy, economic power etc (mention some facts like 5th largest GDP, rankings in tech indices etc)
Then you can mention interests of both countries and where they can collaborate, mention some figures like trade data etc to make your answer more informative.
Points under Indian interests are good. Those can be mentioned in collaboration areas.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Nandhini
Intro is fine. After that mention some advantages that Britain has in field of economy/technology/innovation etc and how these can be used by the country to form partnerships. The first statement of the question also need to be talked about.
Areas of cooperation part is fine. You have mentioned some good points.
Some challenges in the relationship can be mentioned too.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Muskan
Nice attempt. Intro is good, you have written well. Use some data to validate your points, for e.g. you can mention trade data. You can also mention about Britain looking for partners after Brexit, its technological/economic/innovation advantage..some challenges in the relationship and how to overcome them can also be written about in the end.
Other points mentioned by you are good, conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂