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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ judges-cannot-be-shielded- from-citizens-questions- 7669480/ - In the intro, mention the comment by the CJI about the attack on judges.
- In the body, mention the role of the judiciary in the protection of citizens’ rights and issues it is currently facing such as perception created due to pendency of important cases, working of collegium system and concerns raised over its functioning and citizens right to question and critically examine the functioning of the judiciary without personally attacking the judges.
- Conclude by mentioning for the judiciary to address the issues it faces while being receptive to the public scrutiny..
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Nandhini
Your understanding of the question is good but present it in a more nuanced way. Content is also fine.
Intro is good, after that mention role of judiciary, mention some constitutional articles like 13, 32 etc to underline the mandate of judiciary- it will give more weight to your points.
Next part is good, however subheading can be better (issues plaguing the judiciary is fine).
Some of the examples are good that you have written, mention of pending cases is also nice.
Lack of transparency in collegium system while making appointments and transfers, allegations of nepotism etc can also be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine, before that you can mention a short way forward.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Bhanu
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Bhanu
Intro is fine, after that mention the role of judiciary in protecting citizen’s rights- here mention articles like article 13, judicial review, article 32 etc.
Issues mentioned are good, give a subheading.
Also in collegium system, mention the need of transparency in appointments as well as transfers.
Give examples of some of the important cases that are pending- matters pertaining to the abrogation of Article 370 of the Constitution, the Citizenship Amendment Act, electoral bonds, and many petitions under the preventive detention laws etc
Conclusion is fine. A brief way forward can be mentioned before that.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Muskan
Introduction is fine.
Role of judiciary is also fine, mention about judicial review, constitution articles like 13,32 etc can also be mentioned.
Issues are well written, lack of transparency in collegium system while making appointments and transfers, allegations of nepotism etc should be mentioned.
Right of citizens part is good, you can mention where contempt of court has been frivolously used.
In conclusion, you have written some good points..can mention them as a brief way forward and then conclude.
Keep practicing. Overall, good attempt. 🙂
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