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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ countries-in-south-asia-must- learn-from-each-other-in- fight-against-covid-7362383/ - In the intro, mention the shared history, geography and culture among the South Asian neighbours.
- In the body, mention the commonality of destruction caused by the pandemic across the world which necessitates cooperation among the nations. In this aspect, countries in South Asia deals with similar problems and can develop solutions collectively to be applied across the region. In the examples mention experiment conducted in Bangladesh (NORM) and applied in India, Pakistan, Afghanistan and Nepal, also mention Swasth Community Science Alliance in India.
- Conclude by mentioning the hope that this cooperation in dealing with pandemic may bring in a new era of partnership in social innovations that can benefit all South Asians
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Santosh
Your answer is good. Introduction is fine.
In the body ,you can also mention the severity of pandemic especially 2nd wave which calls for combined action, also you can give examples of similar problems like poverty, hunger, shared geography, aversion to mask use, similar cultural beliefs to show the similarity between South Asian countries.
You have written about successful models which countries have applied , that is good, points like NORM and CSA are fine too.
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Sumita
Nice attempt. You can add some pre Covid 19 successful examples of co-operation and learning from each other- microcredit started by grameen bank being followed across the region, India’s Aadhar-Jan Dhan combine for social sector getting traction etc
Also explain the 4 facets of NORM briefly and mention about SEWA which lapped it up in India.
Rest of the content is good. Introduction and conclusion are fine. Your language skills are good too.
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Gauri Shankar
Your introduction is fine. Content is okay but it lacks dimensions. Mention about community led cooperation examples like:
NORM – originated in Bangladesh, adopted across India-Pak, role of SEWA
Swasth community science alliance- to treat mild and moderate covid cases.
These points you can use in context of covid, some other mutual learnings across South Asia can be cited as successful examples- microcredit from B’desh, social protection of Aadhar-JanDhan model from India.
Help related points can be mentioned in one point only.
Conclusion is good.
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Utkarsh
Good attempt. Introduction is good.
In the body ,you can also mention the severity of pandemic especially 2nd wave which calls for combined action, also you can give examples of similar problems like poverty, hunger, shared geography, aversion to mask use, similar cultural beliefs to show the similarity between South Asian countries.
Examples are good. Some pre covid examples such as microcredit model of B’desh and Aadhar- Jan Dhan of India can be given to show the benefits of learning from each other.
Conclusion is good.
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Vishal
Nice attempt but answer is very generic.
After introduction, you can give examples of similar problems like poverty, hunger, shared geography, aversion to mask use, similar cultural beliefs to show the similarity between South Asian countries.
Mention some covid related community initiatives which countries have adopted from each other and can serve as an example for future cooperation:
NORM – originated in Bangladesh, adopted across India-Pak, role of SEWA
Swasth community science alliance- to treat mild and moderate covid cases.
Take the help of the article mentioned, you will get some good points.
Points about Saarc, Bimstec are fine but you have to answer in the context of covid.
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Utkarsha
Answer is fine. You can mention about NORM in a bit of detail, talk about how SEWA in India adopted it as the question is focused on covid 19.
Introduction is good, you can mention some similar problems South Asian countries face like poverty, hunger, aversion to masks in context of covid poor health care infrastructure etc
Conclusion is good. Way forward is also fine, you can talk more about need of community led interventions and mutual learning.
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Subhashree
Introduction is good, you can mention some similar problems South Asian countries face like poverty, hunger, aversion to masks in context of covid poor health care infrastructure etc
Examples of successful interventions are good, you have covered many points.
You can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
Conclusion is good.
Nice attempt. Keep practicing. 🙂
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Ankita
You have the knowledge and content but try to structure the answer better.
Introduction is fine. Then as the question is in context of covid, points and examples related to it should be mentioned at one place.
Microcredit, aadhar, brac- these are not related to covid, so you can mention them in short as ‘other successful interventions from which we can learn’ separately. Don’t mix everything up. Also keep these points short.
You can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
Conclusion is good.
Nice attempt. Keep practicing.
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Rajlaxmi
Nice attempt. Introduction is good. Mention covid related cooperation and non- covid related separately. Question is asking in the context of covid 19,so there should be more focus on that part.
Examples and points are good. No need for much changes.
You can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
Conclusion is good.
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Sana
Your content is fine. Language skills are also good, answer is written well. You can work on more nuances now such as ensuring you don’t miss any part of the question, mention a way forward wherever possible, make the intro-conclusion better by including more keywords rather than generic statements.
Anyways, in this answer you can mention some similar problems South Asian countries face like poverty, hunger, aversion to masks in context of covid poor health care infrastructure etc
Also, you can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
Good attempt. Keep writing. 🙂
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Kartikey
Answer is fine, content is good, structure is good too.
You can also mention about swasth community science alliance which is trying to treat mild and moderate covid cases. Started from India.
Since the question is asking in context of covid, mention more covid related interventions.
Also, you can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
Good attempt. Keep writing. 🙂
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Murari
Your content and knowledge is fine, try to improve language skills, use more keywords for example in NORM, mention what each letter stands for.
In introduction you can mention some similar problems South Asian countries face like poverty, hunger, aversion to masks in context of covid poor health care infrastructure etc
Examples written in the answer are good, no need for much change.
Also, you can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
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Vishnu
Before mentioning successful interventions like microcredit and sanitation, you can mention some similar problems South Asian countries face like poverty, hunger, aversion to masks in context of covid, poor health care infrastructure etc
Examples written in the answer are good, no need for much change.
You can also mention about swasth community science alliance which is trying to treat mild and moderate covid cases. Started from India.
Since the question is asking in context of covid, mention more covid related interventions.
Also, you can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
Read some other answers. Keep writing.
5.5/10
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Deepali
Introduction is fine, content can be better.
Question is about south Asia, so no need to mention ASEAN, Singapore etc
Also talk about community led interventions which we can adopt from each other’s countries and not just about government help. Some examples:
NORM – originated in Bangladesh, adopted across India-Pak, role of SEWA
Swasth community science alliance- to treat mild and moderate covid cases.
Take the help of the article mentioned, you will get some good points. You can mention government initiatives too but these are necessary.
Also, you can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
Conclusion is good.
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Shivanshu
Answer is fine, presentation can be a bit better.
Introduction is good, mention of similarities and problems is also well appreciated.
You have mentioned open defecation, microcredit in covid related cooperation, that is not correct- those are pre covid mutual learnings, you can mention them separately.
Mention terms like NORM, swasth community science alliance in successful interventions related to Covid, use of keywords should be there. Other points are good.
Also, you can write a short way forward where you can talk of increasing government led cooperation through regional forums like SAARC, also about need of community led interventions, mutual learning and adopting best practices of each other.
Conclusion is good.
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Arpit
Introduction is fine. You can mention some similar problems South Asian countries face like poverty, hunger, aversion to masks in context of covid, poor health care infrastructure etc
Content of your answer has too much focus on SAARC. That can be collated in one point.
Mention about some community led interventions which the countries are learning from each other and which is reaching grassroots-
NORM – originated in Bangladesh, adopted across India-Pak, role of SEWA in increasing its reach in India
Swasth community science alliance- to treat mild and moderate covid cases.
Take the help of the article above, you will get some good points.
Conclusion is good, short way forward can be mentioned suggesting ways to increase cooperation across the region at all levels- government, community and people to people.
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