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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ parliament-disruption-monsoon- session-opposition-protest- 7435216/ - In the intro, mention the frequent disruption and wastage of time of the houses.
- In the body, mention the reasons such as inadequate time given to air the grievances, unresponsive attitude of the government, political parties not disciplining their members etc. In the suggestion mention, the suggestion given at the 2001 conference held in Central hall suggestions includes increasing the working days, enforcing the code of conduct for MPs and MLAs.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for informed debate in the legislature.
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Pradipti
Nice answer, most points are mentioned. Introduction is fine, you can make it more recent. This is the 17th Loksabha. Can talk about sessions being curtailed and increasing adjournments on a regular basis.
In factors you can also mention about political parties not adhering to parliamentary norms and disciplining their members.
In steps to be taken, also mention the need to reconsider anti-defection law. On issues which do not lead to fall of government or loss of confidence, parliamentarians should be allowed to take independent views. Rest of the points are good.
You are writing well. Keep practicing. 🙂