Mentor’s Comments-
- https://indianexpress.com/article/opinion/columns/peoples-participation-in-the-tb-mukt-india-campaign-can-help-eliminate-the-disease-by-2025-8141630/
- Introduce by talking about the TB-Mukt Bharat Abhiyan and stressing the role of people’s participation in making it successful.
- Mention the way ahead that needs to be taken for eliminating TB by 2025.
- List down some of the government initiatives in this direction.
- End on a positive note.
The Answer of Q2:@Staff
Ankita
Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine. It will be better of you can go according to the question. So, the first part that is whether TB can be eliminated by 2025, can be answered after introduction. You could mention about requirement of collective strength and people’s participation here only.
In way forward, mention some steps that need to be taken to achieve the goal. Since, this is a 15 marker, some detailing will be expected.
You can mention points like early diagnosis of the disease, free treatment to the affected, social mobilization and counselling to tackle stigma around the disease, making our health system more accessible and affordable, infrastructure development in terms of labs, research centres, collaboration with global efforts etc
Government initiatives part is good, points are covered.
Also, try to end with a concluding statement.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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