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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/the- cowin-story-started-with-the- pandemic-but-it-wont-end-with- it-7956262/ - In the intro, mention that CoWIN has proved itself as one of the most secure and robust platforms with minimal data input and zero risk of personal data hacks.
- In the body, describe the various features of the platforms such as scalability, modularity and evolvability that helped in carrying out the Covid-19 vaccination. In the next part mention that the platform can be repurposed for making it a universal immunisation platform.
- Conclude by mentioning that the story of CoWIN has truly been one of national impact and importance and it won’t end with the pandemic: it will segue into a repurposed digital platform for more health use-cases.
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Pranav
I guess you have mixed up your answer copies while posting.
Please correct it.
sorry. here is the correct one
Pranav
Introduction is good. Content can be a bit better, you can mention various features such as inclusivity( multiple languages, included both private and public facilities etc) , scalability(point no. 1,use keyword), modularity and evolvability (adept at keeping pace with the changing policy environment and scientific research and developments in the administration of vaccines; CoWIN never became the bottleneck or delayed the implementation of our vaccination policies or drive). Using keywords will make the presentation of the answer impressive.
Conclusion is fine, however before that you can talk about repurposing the platform for universal immunization.
Keep practicing. Go through the article tagged above once. 🙂
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