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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/india-must- directly-engage-with-taliban- 20/article35454736.ece - In the intro, mention the Taliban’s increasing control over Afghanistan against the backdrop of the US withdrawal.
- In the body mention reasons for India’s hesitancy in avoiding engaging Taliban such as avoiding Afghanistan government moving towards SCO and China, lack of access to Taliban leadership, past record of violence by Taliban and international criticism it received, the possibility of Pakistan acting against India if India establishes deeper links with Taliban etc. In the reasons for increasing engagement mention international acceptance of Taliban, this time is more than it was in 1996, Taliban too is searching for regional and global partners, the Taliban may seek to balance Pakistan by engaging with India, security of India’s assets in Afghanistan requires India’s engagement there, India needs to open up its congested north-eastern frontier.
- You can conclude by stating that an open engagement of the Taliban is neither tolerating nor accepting the condemnable atrocities committed by the Taliban.
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Aabha
Introduction is okay, you can mention some data regarding area controlled by Taliban or geopolitical importance of Afghanistan for India to make it better.
In hesitancy, in the last point, mention current Afghan government, as President Ashraf Ghani might look for national security and political survival. You can mention that a bird in hand is worth two in the bush. Also mention that there is no clarity on what Taliban’s real intentions are and what path will they take after coming to power. Rest of the points are fine.
In necessity, mention that Taliban can’t just be wished away, it is going to remain in the scheme of things. Mention the need to open up the congested North-west frontier as a separate point, also you can mention India’s efforts in that direction.
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Sehaj
Introduction is fine but it will be better if you mention some data about Taliban’s rise and its emergence as an entity which can’t be just wished away. US withdrawal has been mentioned twice.
In hesitancy, mention that India’s relations with current Afghan government are good and open engagement with Taliban might make President Ashraf Ghani look towards China and SCO for national security and political survival. You can mention that a bird in hand is worth two in the bush. Also mention that there is no clarity on what Taliban’s real intentions are and what path will they take after coming to power. Rest of the points are fine.
In necessity of engagement part too, some more points can be mentioned-international acceptance of Taliban; Taliban also might be looking for regional and global partners for recognition, also might want to balance Pakistan. India is also trying to open up its congested north-western frontier as backchannel talks with Pak and political process in Kashmir has indicated.
Conclusion is fine. Keep practicing. Also, don’t worry, all your answers will be reviewed. 🙂
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Utkarsha
In introduction mention some data about Taliban’s rise and its emergence as an entity which can’t be just wished away. You can also mention about US withdrawal from the country. India hasn’t announced an official change in policy so it will be too early to write that.
In hesitancy, points are fine. You can also mention that there is no clarity on what Taliban’s real intentions are and what path they will take after coming to power.
In need of engagement, in 1st point you can give examples of increasing international recognition for Taliban, China, Iran, Turkey etc are all reshaping their relations. Also, Taliban might be looking for partners to balance Pakistan.
Conclusion is fine. Current engagements part is not that necessary here since nothing to do with Taliban, better elaborate on some points in previous sections.
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Sumita
Good attempt. Introduction is fine.
In hesitancy part, also mention that Taliban has a past record of violence and human rights violations which have been criticised globally, so being a democratic country India can’t be sure of how it’s engagement will be received at global level. Rest of the points are good.
In necessity, mention about the increasing international acceptance of Taliban. You can mention examples of countries like China, Iran, Turkey- all reshaping their Afghan policy.
Also you can mention the geopolitical importance of Afghanistan for India and the need to ensure a stable peaceful polity there.
Conclusion is fine. Keep practicing. 🙂
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Murari
Introduction is fine. In reasons for hesitancy, points are good. You can also mention the Pakistan angle, Pakistan might try to create more insurgency in border areas to balance out India’s engagement with Taliban.
In necessity part, mention some new possibilities. Taliban also might be looking for global and regional partners, they would also want to hedge their bets against Pakistan by engaging with India. You can also mention the geopolitical importance of Afghanistan for India, give examples of countries reshaping their foreign policy in order to engage Taliban.
Conclusion is fine. Keep practicing. 🙂
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Rajlaxmi
In introduction you can give some data regarding Taliban’s rise and its emergence as an entity which can’t be just wished away.
After that write a section on why India has been hesitant to engage with Taliban till now- this is a core demand of the question and needs to be addressed properly.
Some reasons- good relations with present Afghan govt, engaging with Taliban might push them away towards China and SCO.
Not clear whom to talk to in Taliban
Past record of Taliban dubious- violence and human rights violations might attract international criticism
Also no clarity on what Taliban’s real intentions are and what path will they take when in power.
Point no 1 and 4 can be written in 2nd part that is why it is necessary to engage with Taliban.
Also point about SAARC is not correct-India has good relations with many SAARC countries.
Points written in way forward are also reasons why India should engage.
Conclusion is fine. Keep practicing.
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