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-https://indianexpress.com/article/opinion/columns/what-india-must-keep-in-minding-when-it-comes-to-turkey-7390597/
-In the intro, mention the U. S.’s exit and its significance for the geopolitics of the region.
-In the body mention background of India-Turkey relations in the past. In the next part mention U.S. exit and Turkeys growing influence, Turkey’s stand on Kashmir against India, Turkey relations with Pakistan etc. In dealing with Turkey, India should focus on pushback against Turkey’s attempt to take the leadership from Saudi Arabia etc.
-Conclude by mentioning India to learn from Turkey to balance the relation by challenging it when it must at the same time prepare for more intensive bilateral engagement with it.
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Subhashree
Introduction is good. After that your answer is mainly focused on Turkey-Pakistan alliance and same points have been repeated. Try to cover more dimensions.
Pasts relation part with India is fine, you can mention that Turkey was mostly part of US alliance, joined NATO during cold war.
In Turkey’s attempt of increasing influence, points about Afghanistan and Pakistan are fine (make them concise); then add points about its efforts to take leadership of Islamic world from Saudi Arabia; strong political support for Dhaka on the Rohingya refugee crisis; buys S-400 missiles from Russia in defiance of NATO, while challenging Moscow’s primacy in the Caucasus; recent stand against Israel inspite of being one of the first countries to establish diplomatic relations.
Then you can write a way forward for India-
Multiple options of pushing back-naval exercise between India and Greece in the Mediterranean offers a small hint of India’s possibilities in Turkey’s neighborhood; up its game in the Arab world; can raise issue of hypocrisy on minority rights(Kurds)
Must challenge Turkey wherever opportunity arises due to resentment against them
Also intensively engage bilaterally
Keep the conclusion simple.
Nice attempt. Keep writing.
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Sumita
Nice attempt. Content as well as structure of the answer is good.
In Turkey’s attempt of increasing influence in the region you can add some points like strong political support for Dhaka on the Rohingya refugee crisis; buys S-400 missiles from Russia in defiance of NATO, while challenging Moscow’s primacy in the Caucasus; recent stand against Israel inspite of being one of the first countries to establish diplomatic relations.
Way forward for India is good, you can also mention that India too can raise an issue of minority rights in Turkey over their treatment of Kurds.
Conclusion is good.
Good answer overall. Keep practicing. 🙂
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Rohan
You have written well. Content is good.
Introduction is fine too. In Turkey’s attempt of increasing influence in the region you can add some points like strong political support for Dhaka on the Rohingya refugee crisis; buys S-400 missiles from Russia in defiance of NATO, while challenging Moscow’s primacy in the Caucasus; recent stand against Israel inspite of being one of the first countries to establish diplomatic relations. You can write these briefly to cover more dimensions.
Mention opportunity to expose Turkish hypocrisy over minority rights as one of the points in way forward for India. Rest of the points are good.
Conclusion is fine too. Keep writing. 🙂
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Kartikey
In introduction mention about the recent US withdrawal of troops from Afghanistan which had created a space for different powers in the region.
Relations with India are fine. Also you can give a passing reference to history and Khilafat movement.
In In Turkey’s attempt of increasing influence in the region, other than Afghanistan- Pakistan, you can also mention its ambition of wresting leadership of Islamic world from Saudi Arabia, buying defence equipment from Russia defying NATO and then challenging Russia in Caucasus, doublespeak over Israel.
Way forward and conclusion are fine.
Good attempt overall. Keep practicing. 🙂
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