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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/the-abraham- accords-as-indias-west-asia- bridge/article36007225.ece - In the intro mention the Abraham Accrods singed between Israel and Arab countries.
- In the body, mention the importance of the region for India and how the normalisation of the relations between Arab countries and Israel has implications far beyond these countries. Mention its implications for India which had to balance the relations with both the camps.
- Conclude by mentioning that India will be expected to be more assertive, diplomatically and militarily, in its posturing in the region in the future.
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Muskan
Introduction is fine. Frame sub-headings according to question, instead of writing India and west Asia mention it as importance of West Asia for India, keep focus on UAE/Israel- Iran is not a part of Abraham accords, so you can write 1-2 points about it separately.
While writing about the Accords- mention its importance- earlier India had to very delicately balance between Arab states and Israel which has become easier now. Also mention about the increasing defence cooperation- exercise Zayed Talwar, visit of defence chiefs, import of weapons etc. Rest of the points mentioned about trade, diaspora etc are good.
You can mention a small way forward that India will be expected to be more assertive, diplomatically and militarily, in its posturing in the region in the future especially in light of India’s economic growth and an increasingly important place in global order.
Conclusion is fine. Keep writing.
Also, your answer will be reviewed within 72 hours from the time you post it. So, no need to worry. Mention ‘not checked’ only after that. 🙂
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