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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/the-comrades-and- their-divergent-perspectives/ article34874054.ece - In the intro, mention, the time-tested nature of Indo-Russia ties.
- In the body, describe the long duration of India-Russia ties after Indian independence. Next, mention the changed global circumstance after the disintegration of the USSR resulting in India seeking to balance the threat from China by moving closer to the Western countries. After China rise to global prominence and the Galwan valley incident, Russia seems to subscribe to China’s global vision. Russia’s criticism of Quad and its growing relationship with Pakistan also adds to India’s concerns. All these factors will have consequences for India-Russia relations.
- Conclude by mentioning that Russia stands to gain immensely from the multilateralism that Indo-Pacific seeks to promote.
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Shubham
Introduction is fine. Instead of describing the relationship as ‘give and take’, you can point that Russia has been an all weather friend.
In recent cooperation with Russia, you can give example of BRICS, SCO, India’s involvement in Russian far East.
Also, bring the China-Pak angle in recent divergences.
You can mention it is tough for India to resist a tilt towards west in the face of Chinese agression(Galwan valley, CPEC, indo-pacific hegemony can be mentioned here).
Also you can mention India’s apprehensions with growing Russia-Pak cooperation.
Also change in Russia’s stance towards China can be mentioned- from rivalry during Cold War period to bonhomie now, with both the countries considering US as common rival.
Rest of the points are fine, you have written what is the geopolitical structure right now but reasons are missing. Above points will fulfill that gap.
Conclusion is fine, avoid last line, not sure Russia wants to promote multilateral rules based order with Chinese cooperation, you can mention that Russia stands to gain more if a multilateral rules based order is established in Indo Pacific rather than being a junior partner to China.
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Subhashree
Introduction , I think, can be more nuanced. Avoid things like breakable bond,you can start with a more positive vibe. After all, Russia has been our all-weather friend.
Points mentioned in earlier cooperation are good, you can mention help during Bangladesh liberation war and support on crucial matters in UN.
Also mention some recent examples of cooperation inspite of rising divergence in world view, BRICS, SCO, S400 deal, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc
Rest of the answer is fine but a bit cluttered, you can organize it in 3 parts- why India moved towards west(China, globalization, reforms, democracy etc) ; India’s concerns in Asia (Russia-china bonhomie, both seeing US as rival, Russia-Pak angle); then some of Russia’s concerns (Indo-Pacific, Quad as Asian NATO etc, US involvement in Asia).
Your content is good, organizing it will improve the presentation.
Conclusion is fine, again you can use some bit of nuance like avoid using open its eyes etc, you can write Russia stands to gain more if a multilateral rules based order is established in Indo Pacific rather than being a junior partner to China.
See, we are just analyzing the facts from India’s perspective, so an over-advisory tone to Russia can be avoided. They need to take care of their national interests, we can focus more on our own.
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Rahul
Introduction is fine, give some examples to show how the relationship both during cold War and after it.
During Cold war period-you can mention about help during Bangladesh liberation war, support on key matters in UN, helping India with the process of industrialisation, defence deals etc
Some recent examples of cooperation inspite of rising divergence in world view -BRICS, SCO, S400 deal, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc
You have got the gist of the answer, make it better by giving examples and making it a bit more organised with diverse points.
You can organize it in 3 parts- why India moved towards west(China, globalization, reforms, democracy etc) ; India’s concerns in Asia (Russia-china bonhomie, both seeing US as rival, Russia-Pak angle); then some of Russia’s concerns (Indo-Pacific, Quad as Asian NATO etc, US involvement in Asia).
Conclusion is fine.
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Prashant
You have written well. Some points are missing.
Introduction is fine. Give some examples of cooperation during Cold war period-you can mention about help during Bangladesh liberation war, support on key matters in UN, helping India with the process of industrialisation, defence deals etc
Some more examples of cooperation after cold war can also be mentioned to show cooperation inspite of a divergent world view.
Reasons about why India moved west are fine, you can add some like globalization,reforms,democratic ideals etc. Write about India’s apprehensions with growing Russia-Pak cooperation.
Also change in Russia’s stance towards China can be mentioned- from rivalry during Cold War period to bonhomie now, with both the countries considering US as common rival.
Other points are good.
Conclusion is fine, you can mention Russia stands to gain more if a multilateral rules based order is established in Indo Pacific rather than being a junior partner to China.
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Utkarsh
You have written well. Introduction is good. Points written in Indo- Russian relationship are good. Arrange it in such a way that it shows how the relationship has evolved since independence. You can also mention things like help during Bangladesh liberation war, support to India in UN over key matters ,S400 deal inspite of threat of US sanctions.
Points written in divergences are fine, you have mentioned both India’s and Russia’s concerns, that is good.
Also you can mention 1 point regarding reasons why India has a west tilt in recent times (China, globalization, reforms, democracy etc),change in Russia’s stance towards China can also be mentioned- from rivalry during Cold War period to bonhomie now, with both the countries considering US as common rival.
Conclusion is good.
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Ankita
You have written well, included many points.
Introduction is good. Points written in Indo- Russian relationship are also good. Some recent examples of cooperation inspite of rising divergence in world view -BRICS, SCO, S400 deal, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc can be mentioned.
Reasons why India has seen a west tilt, have been mentioned but you can make it concise.
Mention some of Russia’s concerns( Quad as Asian NATO, apprehensions over Indo-Pacific, US involvement in Asia) and change in Russia’s stance towards China also- from rivalry during Cold War period to bonhomie now, with both the countries considering US as common rival.
Conclusion is good.
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Utkarsha
Introduction is good, first two points in Indo-Russia relationship are good. Last 2 points can be mentioned in next subheading.
Some recent examples of cooperation inspite of rising divergence in world view -BRICS, SCO, S400 deal inspite of US sanctions threat, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc can be mentioned here.
2nd part of the question is important, you need to write in a bit of detail, mention why India moved towards west(China, globalization, reforms, democracy etc) ; then mention some of India’s concerns in Asia (Russia-china bonhomie, both seeing US as rival, Russia-Pak angle); then some of Russia’s concerns (Indo-Pacific, Quad as Asian NATO etc, US involvement in Asia).
You have written some points but you can structure it in the above format.
Way forward and conclusion is good.
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Rajlaxmi
You have answered the 2nd part of the question about divergent perspectives very well. Not much change needed.
However, the first part of the question which talks of amicable ties between India-Russia inspite of all these regional alignment changes is missing in your answer.
Introduction is good. After that mention briefly some examples of cooperation between both countries after Indian independence and during Cold war(help during Bangladesh liberation war, support on key matters in UN, helping India with the process of industrialisation, defence deals etc). Then some post cold war cooperation examples(multilateral forums, S400 deal inspite of threat of US sanctions,India’s involvement in Russian far East etc). Then you can move on to writing about divergence. This will answer the question holistically.
Way forward and conclusion is good, you can mention Russia stands to gain more if a multilateral rules based order is established in Indo Pacific rather than being a junior partner to China.
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Dr House
Good attempt. Introduction is fine. Points mentioned in next para about India-Russia relationship are good too. Some recent examples of cooperation inspite of rising divergence in world view – multilateral forums, S400 deal inspite of US sanctions threat, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc can be mentioned here.
Second part of the question, also, has been addresses neatly.
You can do some value addition, in Quad mention about Russia perceiving it as Asian NATO, you can make the point a bit broader by including Russia’s apprehensions with Indo-pacific as a whole. Russia sees Indo-pacific as a US dominated strategy to contain China-Russia, it talks more in terms of Asia Pacific, you can make that correction in conclusion part also.
Rest of the points are good, some reasons on why India has tilted west off late can be mentioned( China, reforms, globalization, supply chain diversification, democratic etc)
Conclusion is fine, just the point mentioned above.
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Murari
Introduction is fine. Some more recent examples of cooperation inspite of rising divergence in world view – multilateral forums, S400 deal inspite of US sanctions threat, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc can be mentioned.
In rest of the answer, your understanding of the issues is good, try to make the presentation better- organize it in 3 parts- why India moved towards west(breakup of USSR, China, globalization, reforms, democracy etc) ; India’s concerns in Asia (Russia-china bonhomie, both seeing US as rival, Russia-Pak angle); then some of Russia’s concerns (Indo-Pacific, Quad as Asian NATO etc, US involvement in Asia).
Way forward and conclusion is fine, just avoid repeating points.
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Santosh
Answer according to the flow of the questions. Also stick to facts and analyse them only, add your opinion if asked or in way forward.
There are some factual errors in the answer, for example India-Russia don’t cooperate in Quad, in fact Quad is a concern for Russia, similarly India has tilted towards west, not Russia, your subheadings are totally opposite.
After introduction, mention examples of good relations between India-Russia in both cold War times and recently inspite of so many geopolitical changes-partner in industrialization process,defence deals, help during Bangladesh liberation war,support on crucial matters in UN, multilateral forums like BRICS, SCO etc, S400 deal, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc
Rest of the answer you can organize it in 3 parts- why India moved towards west(China, globalization, reforms, democracy etc) ; India’s concerns in Asia (Russia-china bonhomie, both seeing US as rival, Russia-Pak angle); then some of Russia’s concerns (Indo-Pacific, Quad as Asian NATO etc, US involvement in Asia).
Way forward and conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. Try to focus more on what has happened already rather than speculating on what will happen. You can take help from the article. 🙂
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Shivanshu
Introduction is fine, points mentioned after that are also good but you can arrange various examples of cooperation between both countries in a sequence to show that, whatever be the geopolitical alignments, India-Russia relations have been amicable.
Some recent examples that you can add – multilateral forums, S400 deal inspite of US sanctions threat, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc
Structure of rest of the answer is good, you can write about Indo-Pacific/Quad from both Russian and Indian perspective bringing out differences in their view points.
Also mention about Russia-Pakistan angle in the body only in concerns for India. Also you can mention about how Russia’s stance regarding China has changed- from rivals during Cold War to accepting it’s global vision now.
Way forward and conclusion is fine.
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Kartikey
Your content and knowledge of the topic is good.
You need to address both parts of the question adequately. Examples of Indo-Russian cooperation are good, mention it along with some visible changes in global geopolitics since India’s independence. No need to write it in so much details- mention cold war era, fall of USSR, rise of unipolar world under US, rise of assertive China and that should be it.
Give some more space to 2nd part, mention divergent views of both India and Russia on some recent events- Indo-pacific, Quad, on China, on US. Then you can mention some concerns of both countries.
Also you can write a short way forward- increasing cooperation in multilateral forums, trade, mutual recognition of national interests etc
Conclusion is good.
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Vishnu
You need to address both parts of the question adequately.
Give some examples of cooperation between India-Russia in past as well as in present also despite so many geo-political changes:partner in industrialization process,defence deals, help during Bangladesh liberation war,support on crucial matters in UN, multilateral forums like BRICS, SCO etc, S400 deal, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc
Then mention some visible changes in global geopolitics since India’s independence. No need to write it in so much details- mention cold war era, fall of USSR, rise of unipolar world under US, rise of assertive China and that should be it. Keep this part concise, need to address 2nd part too. Frame some statements crisply, for example instead of tiltation of world etc.. you can write rise of a unipolar world after Cold War.
In 2nd part, mention divergent views of both India and Russia on some recent events- Indo-pacific, Quad, on China, on US. Then you can mention some concerns of both countries.
See, you have the content, you just need to present the answer better, focus on what the question is asking, make subheadings according to it, then write down the points.
Also you can write a short way forward- increasing cooperation in multilateral forums, trade, mutual recognition of national interests etc to end on positive note.
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Saheli
The points written on divergent perspectives are good, just one point is missing about the difference in perspective of both countries about Indo-Pacific and Quad. Try to include that. Also try to make the whole part more concise.
You have missed the first part, should start with that. Give some examples to show the strong partnership between India and Russia in the past-partner in industrialization process,defence deals, help during Bangladesh liberation war,support on crucial matters in UN etc . Then write some examples of recent cooperation to show that even in the face of changing geopolitics the relations have been steady till now-multilateral forums like BRICS, SCO etc, S400 deal inspite of threat of US sanctions, India’s involvement in Russian far East etc
Conclusion is fine.
Your knowledge and content is good, but try to include all dimensions of the question in your answer.
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Arpit
Introduction is good. Amicable ties with Russia part is also good. You can mention some more points according to word limit and time available, eg- cooperation in Bangladesh liberation War, support in UNSC ,multilateral forums etc.
Briefly , you can also mention about the changing geopolitical scenario since independence-cold war era, fall of USSR, rise of unipolar world under US, rise of assertive China.
Points in divergence are good- mention differences over idea of Indo-Pacific also, Russia-Pakistan cooperation a concern for India. How Russia’s stance regarding China has changed- from rivals during Cold War to accepting it’s global vision now can also be mentioned.
Conclusion is good.
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