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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ political-input-in-policy- making-for-india-7777204/ - In the intro, mention the emphasis on policy continuity in the budget this year.
- In the body, mention the challenges in policymaking as an interplay between the experts and the politicians, this is more prominent in the case of economic policies. In the next part mention the important role of experts in policy-making and institutions.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to include more and more experts in the institutions to achieve the objectives set by it.
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Karun
Good attempt.
Introduction is fine, you have linked with current affairs. You can also talk about the need of continuity in policies especially financial ones like budget, which are increasingly getting influenced by political parties in power.
Rest of the answer is fine, quite a number of points have been covered, a brief way forward can be suggested at the end.
Conclusion is decent.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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