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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ centre-must-make-way-for- states-in-covid-fight-7368026/ - In the intro, mention the difference in the ways India dealt with the second Covid wave in which States were given autonomy in deciding the measures.
- In the body, first briefly mention specific roles for which the Union or States are better placed than other;
Then mention that health is the State subject and consequently States have more resources at their disposal when it comes to health be it employees or hospital. However, GoI should support and fund the State programs. GoI can also play a major role in vaccination. GoI must also augment the supplies of critical medical goods. State governments should use breathing time to ramp up the capacity. States also need standard guidance protocols for health workers, an efficient management team and transparency measures. - Conclude by mentioning that the central government must realise that states are on the forefront in this war, and therefore, play a supporting and proactive role.
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Subhashree
Nice attempt, answer is fine. Most of the points are included.
In role of centre mention about vaccine procurement and allocation to states according to population. You can give the example of current vaccination policy.
Rest of the points are fine.
Conclusion is good. Not much change needed.
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Ankita
Introduction is fine.
In role of centre, also mention the need to augment and procure supplies of other life saving drugs and instruments.
Role of states are written well, you can add the need to create an integrated system where good doctors can examine patients via telemedicine and the control room can then find a bed immediately if needed. Also mention about the need of transparency.
Rest of the points are good.
Conclusion is fine.
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Vishal
Good attempt. Introduction is fine. You can also mention the difference in the ways India dealt with the second Covid wave in which States were given autonomy in deciding the measures.
Some points are missing in role of states- making available telemedicine facility, setting up control rooms both to assist patients and to support health workers, deciding upon calibrated lifting of lockdown, involving private sector too etc
In role of centre mention about the need to augment and procure in addition to vaccines other life saving drugs and instruments through imports/donations etc and distribute them to states. Remaining points are good.
Conclusion is fine.
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Sana
Good attempt. Introduction is fine.
In role of centre, you have mentioned pan – India vaccination drive, you can detail it a bit- centre should augment supplies of and procure vaccine from wherever it can and then allocate it to states based on population, job of vaccination in the states should be left to the states.
In role of states, you can add the need for transparency, huge mismatch is being seen in official numbers and numbers mined by media, daily press briefing by a professional, involving private sector too in putting the systems in place etc
Remaining points are good. No need for change.
Conclusion is fine.
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Rajlaxmi
Nice answer. Use of examples and quoted from survey are good.
In introduction you can mention the difference in approach in dealing with 2nd covid wave.
Points you have written are good. You can also mention the role of states in lifting lockdowns in a calibrated way. States should also involve the private sector to augment the systems in place, can mention about transparency too, daily professional press briefings etc.
Points about centre are fine.
Conclusion is good.
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Sonal
Nice attempt. Most of the points are included. Introduction and conclusion is fine too.
You can include some examples of good practices by states, interventions in tribal areas of chhatisgarh, also some administrative steps taken by different state governments/district admins.
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Harshaa
Since this is a 15 mark question, content is less. Otherwise, your understanding and structure of the answer is fine.
You can mention some steps for centre : augmenting supplies and procurement of vaccines as well as other critical drugs and equipments. Then it should allocate the vaccine efficiently to the states too.
In role of states, you can mention the need to set up control rooms for both patients and helath workers, ramp up telemedicine facilities, increase availability of bed, oxygen etc, can involve private sector too. Also need to increase transparency, can arrange for daily professional press briefings etc
Conclusion is good, just adjust the content according to marks. 🙂
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Santosh
The content is fine but the presentation can be a lot better.
Introduction is fine.
Mention two different subheadings- one for union and another for states, and write all your points both steps taken and suggestions for each in each subheading respectively.
Also you can mention some more points such as calibrated lifting of lockdown should be done by states after analyzing ground situation, need for transparency can be addressed by daily press briefings by a professional.
Conclusion is fine, try to bring some more clarity both in handwriting and sentence formation.
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Dr House
Most of the points are mentioned. Introduction is good. Subheadings are fine too.
In role of centre, mention about role of procurement of vaccines and allocation to states based on population, also about fair and equitable distribution of life saving drugs and devices etc.
You can also mention some examples of good practices wherever applicable regarding the points written for value addition.
Not much change needed. Good attempt overall.
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Sushmita,
Well written answer. You have mentioned most of the points. Introduction is good.
In role of states you can mention the need for setting of control rooms for health workers too, involving Asha and ANMs for increasing awareness about mask use, sanitization etc, involving private sector to augment system capabilities, maintaing transparency, can hold daily press briefings by a professional etc
Role of centre is fine. Conclusion is good too.
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Kartikey
You have mentioned most of the points. Introduction is good.
In role of states you can mention the need for setting of control rooms for both patients and health workers, making available reliable telemedicine facilities, involving Asha and ANMs for grassroot interventions, involving private sector to augment system capabilities, maintaing transparency, can hold daily press briefings by a professional etc
Role of centre is fine. Conclusion is good too.
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Aabha
Your content and knowledge is fine, presentation can be better. Some of the statements are wrongly framed, avoid that. Also you have repeated health is a state subject 3-4 times, no need to do that, mentioning in introduction once is enough.
Give seperate subheadings – one for centre, one for states and write points related to both in respective places, otherwise it becomes a total mixed bag.
In role of states, you can add some points such as- setting of control rooms for health workers too, involving Asha and ANMs for increasing awareness about mask use, sanitization etc, involving private sector to augment system capabilities, maintaing transparency, can hold daily press briefings by a professional etc
Mention about role of centre in procurement of vaccines and fair and equitable allocation.
Rest of the points mentioned are fine, conclusion is good too.
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Shivanshu
Nice answer. Points are good. You have incorporated some legal points such as DM act provisions, that is good.
Introduction is fine. In role of states you can mention the need for setting of control rooms for health workers too, making available reliable telemedicine facilities, maintaing transparency, can hold daily press briefings by a professional etc
Also some examples of tribal areas of Chhatisgarh, Nandurbar in Maharashtra can be mentioned.
Mention about the role of procuring vaccines by adding supply support/imports/gifts etc and it’s fair and equitable distribution in role of centre.
Conclusion is fine.
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Vishnu
Introduction is fine but it is a bit long keep it concise. Give more space to role of centre and role of states.
Points in role of states are fine. You can mention some more:
Setting of control rooms for health workers too, involving Asha and ANMs for increasing awareness about mask use, sanitization etc, involving private sector to augment system capabilities, maintaing transparency in data, can hold daily press briefings by a professional etc
In role of centre mention about the need to procure supplies of other critical life saving drugs and devices and its fair and equitable distribution to states.
Mention of other points like NORM is good but don’t do it the cost of points in above two sections. If you are short on content you can use.
Conclusion is fine.
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Arpit
Introduction is fine, you can also mention about the difference in autonomy provided to states during both covid waves.
Points mentioned in states’ role are fine.
You can add some: need of setting of control rooms for health workers too,making available reliable telemedicine facilities, involving Asha and ANMs for increasing awareness about mask use, sanitization etc, involving private sector to augment system capabilities etc
Also some examples of tribal areas of Chhatisgarh, Nandurbar in Maharashtra can be mentioned.
Role of centre is fine, you can use a separate point for vaccine procurement and its fair and equitable distribution, as it has been hotly debated.
Conclusion is good.
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