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https://www.thehindu.com/opinion/op-ed/delhis-lame-duck-assembly/article35088142.ece?utm_source=op-ed&utm_medium=sticky_footer
-In the intro, mention recent amendment to GNCTD Act.
-In the body, mention that there is difference in Centre-State relation and Centre-Delhi relation. Next, mention how this difference leads to disputes between Centre and Delhi governmet. In the required changes you can mention giving more powers to Delhi government through amendment.
-Conclude by mentioning the consider amendment to address the issues.
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Utkarsha
Introduction is good. Then no need to trace the whole history, you can directly come to 69th amendment and Article 239AA.
Table is good, amendments are also fine, then mention some consequences of the amendment act. Enormous powers to LG, concern regarding free speech in the assembly, inability of legislature to hold executive to account, committees rendered powerless etc
Then write a way forward where you can mention 1-2 provisions of judgement, also need for consensus based approach, representative governance etc. Finally conclude.
In this question focus should be more on what problems have risen due to amendment act and what are some probable solutions.
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Fauziya
Introduction and background part are good.
Then mention some of the consequences of this amendment act- Enormous powers to LG, concern regarding free speech in the assembly, inability of legislature to hold executive to account, committees rendered powerless, against cooperative federalism etc
In way forward you can mention about the SC judgement and some of its provisions. The points you have written in way forward doesn’t add much value, you can avoid. Instead mention about need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc
Also write a concluding statement.
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Vishal,
Introduction is fine, you can also mention about article 239AA. Difference between other states and Delhi is also fine.
Then write about some provisions of the recent amendment and it’s consequences. You can’t restrict it to just a passing mention. Meaning of government you have mentioned. Add that LG’s concurrence is compulsory on any executive order, assembly shall not make any rule to enable itself or it’s committees to consider the matters of day to day administration etc
Some of the consequences of this amendment act- Enormous powers to LG, concern regarding free speech in the assembly, inability of legislature to hold executive to account, committees rendered powerless, against cooperative federalism etc
In way forward you can mention about the SC judgement in 2018 case and some of its provisions. Need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc
Conclusion is fine.
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Sumita
The act hass been passed, so you can frame the introduction better.
After that no need to write so much, mention 69th amendment, article 239AA and some provisions. Make it concise and crisp. Mention about public order, police and land not under Delhi govt, CM appointed by president etc. Then mention some provisions of the recent amendment act. Government=LG,LG’s concurrence is compulsory on any executive order, assembly shall not make any rule to enable itself or it’s committees to consider the matters of day to day administration etc
Then in disputes both points seem similar, you can club them, add some consequences of the recent amendment act- Enormous powers to LG, concern regarding free speech in the assembly, inability of legislature to hold executive to account, committees rendered powerless, against cooperative federalism etc
In way forward, 1st point is actually a consequence of the amendment.2nd point is fine, mention about the SC judgement in 2018 here only. Need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc also can be added.
Conclusion can be generic- need to uphold democratic principles etc
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Mradul
Introduction is fine. After that no need to mention why Delhi is special in such detail, better mention HOW Delhi is different by mentioning some provisions of 69th constitutional amendment. You can mention about public order, police and land not under Delhi govt, CM appointed by president etc.
In are changes needed section, after mentioning some provisions of the amendment act, mention some consequences- Enormous powers to LG, concern regarding free speech in the assembly, inability of legislature to hold executive to account, committees rendered powerless, against cooperative federalism etc
You can write a separate way forward section, where you can mention about the SC judgement and its 1-2 provisions. Need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc also can be added.
Conclusion is fine.
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Murari
Crux of the matter is what you have written. Answer holistically.
Keep the introduction short by just mentioning that recently GNCTD(amendment) act has been passed.
In the body part, mention 69th amendment, Article 239 AA. The n write points you have written regarding differences with other states.
After that mention some provisions of the recent amendment act and it’s consequences. Some points you have written in introduction.
Provisions- Government=LG,LG’s concurrence is compulsory on any executive order, assembly shall not make any rule to enable itself or it’s committees to consider the matters of day to day administration etc
Consequences- Enormous powers to LG, concern regarding free speech in the assembly, inability of legislature to hold executive to account, committees rendered powerless, against cooperative federalism etc
You can write a separate way forward section, where you can mention about the SC judgement in 2018 case and its 1-2 provisions. Need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc also can be added.
Then conclude.
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Kartikey
Delhi can’t be said to be a full state, so avoid using state in introduction. Also mention article 239AA mention that Delhi has an elected legislative assembly and government. Rest of the points that you have mentioned are good.
Provisions of recent amendment Act are also fine, some corrections can be made for example concurrence of LG needed before any executive action, not ‘some’.
In dispute section also mention about the consequences of this act-Enormous powers to LG, concern regarding free speech in the assembly, inability of legislature to hold executive to account, committees rendered powerless, against cooperative federalism etc
Way forward is good. Need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc also can be added.
Conclusion is fine.
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Deepali
Nice attempt. Introduction and differences mentioned with other states are good. Points are fine, just mention 69th amendment Act, article 239AA etc
Points regarding recent amendment act are also fine. However, you can mention a separate disputes section where you can mention the consequences of the act, also other points like constant bickering between LG and elected govt. etc
You can write a separate way forward section, where you can mention about the SC judgement in 2018 case and its 1-2 provisions. Need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc also can be added.
Then conclude.
Structure of your answer is fine, just way forward part is missing.
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Rajesh
Very good attempt. Introduction is fine. Differences mentioned with other states are good.
Key provisions and criticism of recent act are also fine. You can make criticism part more concise, use hub-spoke diagram.
Write a separate way forward section, where you can also mention 1-2 provisions of the SC judgement. Need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc also can be added.
Conclusion is good.
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Ankita
Decent attempt. Especially the provisions of the amendment act and it’s consequences part is very good.
Introduction is also fine. In differences with other states, you can make a table. You can add some more points and it will improve presentation too.
Write a separate way forward section, where you can also mention 1-2 provisions of the SC judgement in 2018 UoI vs NCT of Delhi case. Need of consensus based approach, representative governance etc also can be added.
Conclusion is good.
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