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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ narendra-modi-uae-visit- significance-7999003/ - In the intro, mention that India’s ties with UAE have seen a rapid transformation in the recent past.
- In the body mention that India-UAE relations have acquired political depth and strategic character in the past few years with improved trade relation and the signing of the CEPA which promises to increase the bilateral trade to $100 billion from $60 billion in five years. In the next part mention the improved scope for regional cooperation after the signing of the Abraham Accords, the formation of 2I2U etc. Also mention the scope for cooperation in technology, transport and infrastructure projects.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to further the engagement with UAE.
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Chandan
Introduction is fine.
Some points are good in the next part, but some are repetitive for example you have written about trade, then again written about expanding exports. CEPA is an important agreement and it should be mentioned in detail along with its objective of increasing bilateral trade from $60 billion to $100 billion in five years.
Rather than naval partnership, you can talk about the location of UAE and it’s importance for India. You can also mention the people to people contacts, partnership in skill development.
In geostrategic importance, energy security is a good point, also mention about normalisation of ties between the UAE and Israel (Abraham accords) which has allowed the emergence of a partnership called I2U2( India, Israel, US, UAE) also called West Asian Quad.
1-2 lines of way forward could be mentioned before conclusion, talking about the scope for cooperation in technology, transport and infrastructure projects.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. Try to include the recent important developments in a relationship while writing answers. 🙂
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Naveen
Decent attempt, content is concise, presentation is good.
Introduction is fine. First part on relationship is also fine, try to write the CEPA full form when writing first time, current trade of $60bn could be mentioned too. Order of zayed given to PM and high level bilateral visits could also be mentioned. Other points are good.
Next part is fine too, in Abraham Accords it should be UAE-Israel rather than Iran-Israel. Also, I2U2 is a recent development, mention the countries involved and its significance.
Conclusion is fine. Scope for cooperation in technology, transport and infrastructure projects could be mentioned.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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