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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/india- japan-diplomatic-relations- 7728623/ - In the intro, mention long growing cooperation between the two countries.
- In the body, give a brief historical background of the ties and the possibilities to take the ties to next level through cooperation in security, building on the shared values of democracy, increasing economic relations and enhancing the cultural exchange.
- Conclude by mentioning that the ties would continue to flourish and the long history of the relations between two countries substantiates that.
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Alka
Introduction is good.
In next part, give a subheading- something on the lines of existing cooperation or historical ties, you can write in points for better presentation.
Content is good.
In future possibilities, when writing about security- mention role in Indo-Pacific, in economic cooperation you can mention about investment opportunities, role in building social infrastructure, connectivity etc
You can also mention people to people relations, Japan is an aging country and India can fullfil the demand of labour.
Other points about democracy, culture etc are good.
Conclusion can be more futuristic.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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