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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/india- vaccine-hesitancy-covid- inoculation-drive-7355171/ - In the intro, mention the importance of vaccination to deal with the Covid-19 challenge.
- In the body, mention the factors driving vaccine hesitancy-misinformation, disinformation, fear, lack of information etc. Also, lack of internet, lack of digital literacy, lack of access etc. as the factors increasing the digital divide and thereby access to vaccines. In the suggestions mention WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes, engagement with the community, information campaigns in local languages etc. To bridge the digital divide, suggest helpline number, walk-in registration and vaccination, use of points of contacts such as post offices, fair price shops etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for thinking local and utilising established networks to create culturally resonant messages to reduce vaccine hesitancy, bridge the digital divide and achieve vaccine saturation.
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Vishal
You have written a nice answer but I think you can increase the content.
Introduction is good, for hesitancy you can add some reasons like misinformation, disinformation, rumor-mongering, fear etc
Some of these measures also you can add–
For vaccine hesitancy:
WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes(give incentives to people)
engagement with the community,
Information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(give examples)
Involve ASHA workers and the ANMs, these are trusted local figures
To bridge the digital divide:
helpline number, walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Prompted fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Conclusion is good. You have used the UP example, good, you can use some more of successful models, you will get them in the article.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Shubhashree
You have made a nice attempt, but I think you have ignored the ‘digital divide’ part and focused only on vaccine hesitancy.
Points for both reasons and measures for vaccine hesitancy are good, in measures you can add leveraging ASHA workers, ANMs etc in rural areas as they are trusted. Also give some examples if possible, like use of popular folk songs in Chhattisgarh.
Measures to bridge the digital divide:
helpline number, walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Prompted fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Conclusion is good.
Also, since this is a 15 marker, I think you have enough space for the content.
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Rahul
Good answer. You have written most of the points. Measures to improve vaccine distribution are missing.
To bridge the digital divide:
helpline number, walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Prompt fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Also, instead of writing in 2 different sections you can combine and write reasons for both at one place and then suggestions at one place
Also you can use some examples from the article.
Content of the answer is good.Conclusion is okay too.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Utkarsh
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In reasons for vaccine hesitancy you can add : religious dogma, fear among people etc You can use some examples, villagers in Barabanki jumped in Saryu to avoid vaccination etc
Examples of successful models like PayNearby, Swachh Bharat etc can be added in respective categories in suggestions also.
Rest of the answer is good, you have mentioned many points.
Conclude by mentioning the need for thinking local and utilising established networks to create culturally resonant messages.
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Anupam
Introduction and reasons given are good. In suggestions, try to include multiple angles, for example to counter digital divide just increasing internet connectivity is not enough. Some of the measures you can write –
For vaccine hesitancy:
WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes(give incentives to people)
engagement with the community,
Information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(give examples)
Involve ASHA workers and the ANMs, these are trusted local figures
To bridge the digital divide:
helpline number, walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Prompted fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Try to include examples of successful interventions.
This is a 15 marker, so you can increase the content.
Read some other answers. Keep writing. 🙂
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Ibrahim
Instead of starting with India’s numbers of vaccination till now, you can start with the importance of vaccination. That will be more relevant to the question.
You can add religious dogmas, fear among people and disinformation campaigns as reasons for vaccine hesitancy.
In suggestions you can add some of these :
For vaccine hesitancy:
WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes(give incentives to people)
Information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(give examples)
Involve ASHA workers and the ANMs, these are trusted local figures
To bridge the digital divide:
helpline number, walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Prompted fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Try to include examples of successful interventions,
Rest of the points are ok, but don’t give example of giving ration only to vaccinated unless there is sufficient supply, suggest some other incentive otherwise hunger issues will add to the problem instead of solving it.
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Shubham
You have written well. Covered almost all points.
You can add some of these points:
For vaccine hesitancy:
WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes(can mention this)
engagement with the community,
Information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(give examples)
Involve ASHA workers and the ANMs, these are trusted local figures
To bridge the digital divide:
walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Prompted fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Introduction and conclusion is good.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Gauri Shankar,
You have written well. First part is very good.
In measures taken, you have mentioned WHO’s Besd model, explain it briefly, otherwise it remains unclear.
You can also mention about information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(Chhatisgarh tribal example), use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc, prompt fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model,involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model.
Rest of the points are very good, conclusion is fine too.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Sumita
Nice attempt. I think you have taken up a lot of space in mentioning reasons for vaccine hesitancy. Mentioning reasons will do., no need to explain that much. Points are good.
Instead, you can write some steps taken by India to address these issues, can use some examples(you will get them in the article mentioned above).
In suggestions too, most of the points are mentioned. Give equal space to each part.
Content of the answer is good, just improve the presentation and use some examples.
Read some other answers, keep writing. 🙂
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Ankita
Answer is good. You can mention reasons of vaccine hesitancy and digital divide first at one place, then move on to mentioning some steps taken and suggestions, it will be a better structure; otherwise the answer looks a bit scattered.
You can add some measures such as:
involve ASHA workers and the ANMs, these are trusted local figures
walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Also, try to give some more successful examples, it will be like value-addition.
Rest of the points are good. Introduction and conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Arpit
Your answer is good, especially the introduction and challenges part.
Suggestions are good too, you can add some more :
For vaccine hesitancy:
WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes(give incentives to people)
engagement with the community,
Information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(give examples)
To bridge the digital divide:
helpline number, walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Prompt fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Always better to write more points than explaining a few.
Conclusion is fine, nice attempt.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Utkarsha
Introduction is good. Digital divide is not a reason for vaccine hesitancy, vaccine hesitancy means not wanting to take vaccines even if it is available whereas digital divide is unavailability of vaccines due to lack of technology or internet. So, you can make separate sub-headings for both and write reasons for each.
Points mentioned in reasons are good, structure of the answer is also good.
Some more suggestions you can add:
walk-in registration and vaccination
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc.
Prompted fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Examples are good.
Read some other answers. Keep writing. 🙂
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Zulu
As this is a 15 marker, you can write in 2.5-3 pages. Content is good, you can add examples of both hesitancy and some successful interventions.
Some of these measures also you can add–
For vaccine hesitancy:
WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes(give incentives to people)
engagement with the community,
Information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(give examples)
Involve ASHA workers and the ANMs, these are trusted local figures
To bridge the digital divide:
Prompt fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
use of points of contacts such as business correspondents,post offices, fair price shops etc. for vaccination
Rest of the points mentioned are okay, try to present more neatly.
Read some other answers. Keep writing. 🙂
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Vivek
Introduction and challenges part is good. You can increase content in suggestions, since it is a 15 marker. Try to use some innovative examples(you will get in the article mentioned above).
Some of these measures also you can add–
For vaccine hesitancy:
WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes(give incentives to people)
engagement with the community,
Information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(give examples)
To bridge the digital divide:
Prompt fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Read some other answers. Keep writing. 🙂
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Chandrama
Introduction is good. Digital divide is not a reason for vaccine hesitancy, vaccine hesitancy means not wanting to take vaccines even if it is available whereas digital divide is unavailability of vaccines due to lack of technology or internet. So, you can make separate sub-headings for both and write reasons for each.
Points mentioned in reasons are good.
Some of these measures also you can add–
For vaccine hesitancy:
WHO’s BeSD model based on behavioural changes(give incentives to people)
engagement with the community,
Information campaigns in local languages, local graffiti, popular folk songs etc.(give examples)
To bridge the digital divide:
Prompt fintech startups to enable vaccine registration Ex- PayNearby model
Involve all level of public servants Ex- Swachh Bharat model
Use examples, that will add value to the answer.
Way forward is good, you can keep purposes of vaccination part short.
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Shivanshu
In introduction instead of vaccine, it should be covid.
Points mentioned in reasons as well as suggestions are good.
You can add examples in both parts for value-addition.You will get some good examples in the article mentioned above.
Also, try to write a conclusion.
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