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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/what- we-need-to-fix-our-judicial- system-7607679/lite/ - In the intro, mention recent issue of delay in releasing the accused after grant of bail.
- In the body, mention the lac of use of technology, delay in release of accused after grant of bail, application of repealed laws, lack of transparency etc. In the measures mention e-courts project and FASTER.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to implement the mentioned project.
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Siddharth,
Introduction is fine, however you can relate it to current affairs for extra points.
Points in challenges are good, you have covered most of the points; something about shoddy investigation-forensics can be mentioned.
In measures, you have mentioned Prakash singh case, FASTER etc. Also some point regarding Malimath committee and its recommendations can be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine, overall nice answer.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Nandhini,
Nice attempt. Introduction is good, challenges mentioned are also fine. You can also mention delay in investigation, poor quality of forensic labs, overcrowded prisons and torture in those places etc
In suggestions try to incorporate some points from Prakash Singh judgement or the Malimath Committee recommendations. Rest of the points are good, conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Muskan
Introduction is fine, challenges are also okay but a bit generic about judiciary, mention some points specific to criminal justice system- investigation-forensics, issues in role of police etc
In suggestions try to mention SC judgement in Prakash Singh case and some recommendations of Malimath committee. Rest of the points are good, e-courts, FASTER etc
Conclusion is fine. Keep writing. 🙂