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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/longer-term- better-impact/article37527454. ece - In the intro, mention the controversy over the ordinance extending the tenure of the CBI director.
- In the body, mention challenges such as interference by the government, lack of power in investigating in the states, tenure of director, political interference in the appointments of directors etc. In the suggestions mention enacting CBI Act, extending the tenure, transparency in appointment of the head etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for reforms to help the organisation deal with the challenges.
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Siddharth
Decent attempt, especially the challenges mentioned are good. Intro is fine too, however, you have missed mentioning the recent ordinance- it can be mentioned there. Also, in issues you can mention about the frequent transfers of officials which the ordinance seeks to address.
Suggestions are also good, mention 2nd ARC as it had also suggested that a new law should be enacted to govern the working of the CBI.
Conclusion is fine.
Overall good answer, presentation and content both are good.
Keep writing. 🙂
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