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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/an-emigration- bill-that-does-not-go-far- enough/article35549345.ece - In the intro, mention the serious exploitative conditions and other issues faced by the migrant labours in various countries.
- In the body, first mention that the 1983 Act governs the migration and improvements Emigration Bill 2021 seeks to bring such as emigration policy division, the establishment of help desk and welfare committees, pre-departure briefings etc. In the issues mention the lack of human rights framework, it allows manpower agencies to charge workers’ service fees, criminalising workers etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to address these issues in the Bill and recognises the contributions of Indian workers, the unique challenges they face, and uphold the dignity and human rights of migrants
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Subhashree
Decent attempt. Introduction is fine. Mention some more points in improvements, the question is not just about issues. Some points you can mention-
Bill seeks to create two authorities: (i) the Bureau of Emigration Policy and Planning (BEPP), and (ii) the Bureau of Emigration Administration (BEA).
1. The functions of BEPP will consist of preparing policies on matters related to welfare of emigrants; negotiating labour and social security agreements with destination countries.
2. The functions of BEA will consist of maintaining a database of Indian emigrants, and implementing measures and programmes for welfare of emigrants.
It also talks about nodal committees in states and UTs and accreditation of employers.
Issues, way forward and conclusion are fine. You can keep the way forward a bit concise to stick to the word limit.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Utkarsha
In introduction, other than recruitment charges some other issues faced like-contract substitution, deception, retention of passports, non-payment or underpayment of wages, poor living conditions, discrimination and other forms of ill-treatment should also be mentioned to give a proper background, recruitment charges are still there even after the bill indicating that it was not the main issue.
Some more points about the recent bill can be mentioned- these are not mentioned in the article but you need to write these as they are important improvements- the article has focused mainly on issues.
Bill seeks to create two authorities: (i) the Bureau of Emigration Policy and Planning (BEPP), and (ii) the Bureau of Emigration Administration (BEA).
1. The functions of BEPP will consist of preparing policies on matters related to welfare of emigrants; negotiating labour and social security agreements with destination countries.
2. The functions of BEA will consist of maintaining a database of Indian emigrants, and implementing measures and programmes for welfare of emigrants.
It also talks about nodal committees in states and UTs to prosecute entities involved in trafficking of persons, and undertaking pre-departure orientation programmes and also mentions compulsory accreditation of employers.
Issues, way forward and conclusion are fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Sehaj
Keep the introduction short, you can mention all issues in one statements. Focus a bit more on what has been the improvements that is basically provisions of the bill a bit more. This has been exclusively asked and examiner will expect a bit detailed analysis.
You can mention that the bill seeks to create two authorities: (i) the Bureau of Emigration Policy and Planning (BEPP), and (ii)the Bureau of Emigration Administration (BEA).
1. The functions of BEPP will consist of preparing policies on matters related to welfare of emigrants; negotiating labour and social security agreements with destination countries.
2. The functions of BEA will consist of maintaining a database of Indian emigrants, and implementing measures and programmes for welfare of emigrants.
It also talks about nodal committees in states and UTs to prosecute entities involved in trafficking of persons, and undertaking pre-departure orientation programmes and also mentions compulsory accreditation of employers.
Issues mentioned are fine, you can add gender dimension also. Way forward is also fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Jaya
Nice attempt. Introduction is good. In improvements in the bill you can mention that the bill seeks to create two authorities: (i) the Bureau of Emigration Policy and Planning (BEPP), and (ii)the Bureau of Emigration Administration (BEA).
1. The functions of BEPP will consist of preparing policies on matters related to welfare of emigrants; negotiating labour and social security agreements with destination countries.
2. The functions of BEA will consist of maintaining a database of Indian emigrants, and implementing measures and programmes for welfare of emigrants.
Rest of the points are fine.
Challenges mentioned are also fine, you can also talk about ILO conventions and the need to adhere to it.
Way forward and conclusion is fine too. Keep practicing. 🙂