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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/breaking-the- cycle-of-child-labour-is-in- indias-hands/article34702648. ece - In the intro, mention the figures about the number of child labour in India.
- In the body mention the policy measures and their impacts such as Mid Day Meal, MGNREGA 2005, Right to Education 2009, implementation of National Child Labour Project, ratifying ILO conventions etc. In the impact mention impact of pandemic on parents income and livelihood, adoption of online mode of education and consequent digital divide etc. In the measures to mitigate the impact, suggest need for affirmative actions.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to take into account the impact of pandemic and need for policy measures to mitigate it
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Aabha,
Your answer is good, but some improvements can be made. Add more dimensions to your answer.
In introduction part, you can write 1 definition and move on. It will save your word limit for other parts.
For e.g. in policy and interventions, you can mention National child labour project, Pencil portal, ratification of ILO conventions etc.
Also in impacts of pandemic you have just written about online/digital education, write about falling incomes, loss of jobs of parents which can force children in child labour.
Also suggest a way forward compulsorily in such questions with concrete steps, you can mention about need for an urban employment guarantee programme, care for children who have lost parents, counselling sessions etc
Conclusion is good. Read some other answers also.
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Vishal
You have more or less covered all the dimensions of the question. Good, keep it up.
Introduction is well written. In policy measures, mention MGNREGA( increase in wage employment of unskilled rural parents), ILO conventions ratification.
In impact of pandemic, mention about digital divide hampering children who are already poor and with less resource, forcing them to seek employment.
Measures you have written are good. You can mention about the need for an urban employment guarantee programme on the lines of MGNREGA.
Also, you can write 1- line conclusion to end the answer.
Keep writing. Read some other answers also. Best wishes
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Subhashree
Since this is a 15-mark question, try to write in 2.5-3 pages. You have covered the core demands but points are missing, you can add on.
Inroduction is good. In policy measures, mention about Article 24, child labour prohibition act,1986, Pencil portal etc
Effects of pandemic is good, you can mention 1 point about loss of lives and livelihoods of parents effecting children.
Write about measures to mitigate. This is a core demand of the question, what you have written can be used in conclusion. Mention some concrete steps- Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc
You have written a decent answer but try to address all parts of the question. Keep writing.
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Sakshi
You have more or less covered all the dimensions of the question. Good, keep it up.
Frame the introduction better. You can start with 1-line definition of child labour. ‘gripped rigorously’ is a bit awkward. You can write, child labour is prevalent in India, India is effected by etc
You have written the constitutional-legal points really well. Add some policy interventions such as MGNREGA, Mid day meal scheme, pencil portal etc
In impacts of pandemic you can include digital divide in point no 1 that you have written. Measures to mitigate and conclusion is good. No need to make major changes.
Keep writing.
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Gauri Shankar,
You have more or less covered all the dimensions of the question. Good, keep it up
Do some value-addition. Mention articles of the constitution(24,21A), ILO conventions on child labour which India has ratified.
In impacts of pandemic- you can mention about digital divide, suggest some data about low internet penetration in rural areas
Something more concrete like urban employment guarantee program can be suggested in measures to mitigate. Conclusion is good.
Read some others’ answers. Keep writing.
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Aditya
Since this is a 15-mark question, try to write in 2.5-3 pages. You have covered the core demands but points are missing, you can add on.
Introduction is good. In policy measures, mention about Article 24,21A, child labour prohibition act,1986 etc Rest of the points are good.
Write about measures to mitigate. This is a core demand of the question, what you have written can be used in conclusion. Mention some concrete steps- Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc
You have written a decent answer but try to address all parts of the question. Also answer feelslike an essay. Give sub headings and underline wherever necessary. Keep writing.
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Anupam
Since this is a 15-mark question, try to write in 2.5-3 pages. You have covered the core demands but points are missing.
You have directly started the answer with constitutional provisions and legal measures taken, before that you can write at least one line about what is child labour and what is the status in India(you can use census data).
In policy measures you can mention MGNREGA, which provides wage employment to unskilled people in rural areas which help their children to study, Pencil portal of GOI, ratification of ILO conventions.
Write about closure of schools in effects of pandemic and the digital divide in the country, measures to mitigate you have written well, you can add- Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc
Try to write a short conclusion also.Keep writing.
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Naresh
You have more or less covered all the dimensions of the question. Good, keep it up. Use subheadings and underline wherever you can.
In introduction part you can start with a short definition of child labour before writing about the status in India. Do some value-addition, Mention articles 21A,24, mention child labour prohibition act
The Andhra Pradesh example is very good, try to incorporate such examples in future also.
You can mention measures to mitigate under a different sub heading with some add on points like- Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc
Read some others’ answers. Keep writing.
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Great attempt
Got many relevant point ..that I can incorporate to enhance my answers in near future 👍
You have more or less covered all the dimensions of the question. Presentation is also good.
In introduction part you can start with a short definition of child labour and the status in India.
Mention MGNREGA, important intervention- which provides wage employment to unskilled people in rural areas which help their children to study. Also mid day meal scheme- keeps children in school- huge role in increasing gross enrollment.
Rest of the points are good. You are writing well. Just continue.
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Shubham
Your understanding of the issue is good, you have written well, especially the policy and intervention part.
Give adequate space to all parts, you can cut down on the status of child labour in the world in the introduction part, mention about India and move on. It will save you space and word limit for 2nd part which is crammed up.
Mention a conclusion in 1-2 lines. Points are good- You can explain a bit things like digital divide by giving some data about internet penetration in the country.
Keep writing.
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Utkarsha
First part of the answer- introduction and policy initiatives, constitutional provisions etc- you have written very well. Additionally, you can mention MGNREGA, National Child Labour Project and the ratification of ILO conventions by India.
This is a 15 mark question so you can take some more space- 2.5-3 pages, so you can write some parts in points also. Diagrams are good but don’t address all parts by diagrams only. Explain some points such as digital divide with data about internet penetration in India.
In measures to mitigate, you can write some more concrete steps such as- Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc
Read some others’ answers. Keep writing.
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Arpit
Your presentation of the answer is good, understanding is also good.
You have mentioned the constitutional-legal interventions. However, add some policy interventions like- MGNREGA(wage employment for unskilled people in rural areas so that their children can be pulled out of labour), midday meal scheme, national child labour project, Pencil portal.
In impact of pandemic, mention about closure of schools, digital divide- give some data regarding internet penetration etc
Measures to mitigate are good, you can end the answer with 1 line conclusion- commitment to fulfill sdg 8.7
Read some of the answers also. Keep writing.
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Sumita
You have written a good answer, however some points are missing. Mention constitutional (Article 21A, 24, DPSP) and legal steps as prohibition of child labour act, ratification of ILO conventions in policies and interventions.
Effects of pandemic are well written. In measure to mitigate you have mentioned a bit generic points- some more points like Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc can be written.
In conclusion you can give example of Kailash Satyarthi’s bachpan bachao andolan. Rest points are good.
Keep writing.
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Shivanshu
You have covered all dimensions of the question, knowledge is also good. Mention about MGNREGA in policies and interventions- that was an important one.
In effects of pandemic mention loss of lives and livelihoods, children have been orphaned etc- these are some key effects
In measure to mitigate you have mentioned a bit generic points- some more points like Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc can be written.
Conclusion is decent. Can give examples like bachpan bachao andolan. Keep writing.
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Vamsidhar,
In the introduction you can define child labour in brief and give some India-specific data, question is about India so that will be better
Mention constitutional legal provisions in policies and interventions– Article 24, 21A, DPSP, educating fundamental duty, prohibition of child labour act 1986 etc
Mention about loss of lives of parents in effects of pandemic and institutionalized care of orphaned children as one of the measures to mitigate child labour and exploitation.
Rest of the points are good. Mention of SDG in conclusion is also good;
Read some other answers also. Keep writing.
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Deepali,
You can replace the 1st line of the introduction by a simple definition of child labour,it will make it simpler and more effective.
Mention constitutional legal provisions in policies and interventions– Article 24, 21A, DPSP, educating fundamental duty, prohibition of child labour act 1986 etc. Also you can mention Pencil portal, National Child Labour project. Use diagrammatic representation if you feel word limit is a constraint.
Effects of the pandemic is well written. Suggest some concrete steps as mitigating measures as that is specifically asked in the question. You can use- need of an Urban employment guarantee scheme, need of institutionalized care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc
Conclusion is good. Try to write in 3 pages. Keep writing.
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Mradul,
You have written very well. Answer is neat and clean with very good presentation.
However, mention constitutional legal provisions in policies and interventions– Article 24, 21A, DPSP, educating fundamental duty, prohibition of child labour act 1986 etc. This will make the answer multi-dimensional. Rest of the points are good.
Effect of pandemic and measures to mitigate are well written, propose some kind of scheme like urban employment guarantee program to make the mitigation measures more concrete.
Just be consistent and keep writing.
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Sonal
You have written very well. Answer is neat and clean with very good presentation.
However, mention constitutional legal provisions in policies and interventions– Article 24, 21A, DPSP, educating fundamental duty, prohibition of child labour act 1986 etc. This will make the answer multi-dimensional. Rest of the points are good.
Effects of pandemic are well presented, you can also add loss of lives leading to children becoming orphaned.
Suggest some concrete steps as mitigating measures as that is specifically asked in the question. You can use- need of an Urban employment guarantee scheme, need of institutionalized care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc Rest of the points are good, you can cut short some generic ones
Conclusion is good, you can mention about role of civil society such as bachpan bachao andolan.
Just be consistent and keep writing.
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Kartikey
You can begin the answer with a brief definition of child labour before writing data. Otherwise, you have written very well, Covered all the aspects comprehensively.
In policy you can also mention ratification of ILO conventions. In measures for mitigation, some concrete steps like Urban employment guarantee program, need for institutionalized care for orphans and abandoned children can be mentioned.
Conclusion is very good. Just be consistent and keep writing.
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Rupesh,
You have written a good answer.
Introduction part is good.
Mention about MGNREGA in policies and interventions- that was an important one.
In effects of pandemic mention children have been orphaned,abandoned etc- these are some key effects. Rest of the points are good.
In measure to mitigate you can propose some policy measures like Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc can be written.
Conclusion is decent. Can give examples of civil society organizations doing good work like bachpan bachao andolan or mention about sdg 8.7 target of eliminating child labour. Keep writing.
Sir kindly view my introduction as I could not upload it
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Sorry for the inconvenience Sir.The introduction part could not got uploaded.
Rajlaxmi,
Kindly re upload. I will check, half answer is tough to review.
Anyways, regarding effects of pandemic- you have written ILO ratification and SDG 8.7- they are not effects of pandemic- India would have done that anyway.
Write about loss of lives and livelihoods, children becoming orphan or getting abandoned, closure of schools, no mid day meals, digital divide etc.
Way forward is okay but you can propose some policy measures like Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc
Conclusion is decent. Can give examples of civil society organizations doing good work like bachpan bachao andolan for eliminating child labour. Keep writing.
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Santosh
In introduction, give some data regarding how many child labour in India- use census data.
You have addressed the 1st part of the question reasonably well, however 2nd part has been neglected. In policies of govt you can also mention MGNREGA, national child labour project, pencil portal etc They are recent ones. You can remove gurupadswamy committee as it is old or you can make hub and spoke diagram if you fall short of word limit.
Regarding effects of pandemic-
Write about loss of lives and livelihoods, children becoming orphan or getting abandoned, closure of schools, no mid day meals, digital divide etc. You cannot skip this part, this is asked in the question specifically.
Way forward and conclusion is good. You can add policy proposals like Urban employment guarantee scheme, need to care for orphaned children, counselling sessions for vulnerable children etc
Just be consistent and keep writing. For 15 marker use 3 pages.
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