Mentor’s Comments-
- Explain the need of executive accountability.
- Mention various instruments available to the legislature to uphold the accountability of the executive.
- Conclude on the basis of above points.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Sushant
Decent attempt, you have mentioned most of the tools for accountability.
Introduction is fine.
In next part, in first point very briefly you could mention what each of those tools signify. In next point, you could mention about motion of thanks too.
In financial control, you could talk about the budget. In last point, you could emphasize on the role of Rajya Sabha in ensuring checks and balances. Other points are fine.
Way forward is decent enough, you could end with a concluding statement.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Pranav
Introduction is fine.
Next part could be subdivided into further sections such as parliamentary tools, financial control, approval and ratification of bills, loss of confidence etc.
In 1st point you could start with the general process of discussion and deliberation which is also important and include tools like adjournment motion, half-an-hour discussion.
Also, the ordinary law making process also needs to be mentioned, along with the role of RajyaSabha to ensure checks and balances.
Other points are okay.
Loss of confidence motion and motion of thanks should be explained a bit as these can lead to the resignation of the executive.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Chandan
Decent attempt, intro is fine. You could mention article 75 of the constitution.
Next part could be subdivided into further sections such as parliamentary tools, financial control, approval and ratification of bills, loss of confidence etc. Adjust your points accordingly.
Bill passing is also an important tool, especially role of Rajya Sabha could be mentioned.
Further role of parliamentary committees could also be mentioned.
Other points are fine.
Also, try to present neatly, conclusion looks a bit clumsy.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Shilpi
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Decent attempt, introduction is fine, you could mention Article 75 though.
In next part, you could subdivide the points into parliamentary tools, financial control, approval and ratification of bills, loss of confidence etc.
Bills are also passed by the legislature hence it could be mentioned too, especially the role of Rajya Sabha in maintaining checks and balances.
In financial control, you could mention about budget, role of PAC etc
Also, important tools like no confidence motion, motion of thanks could be explained a bit.
Rather than explaining one point on details, you could go for more points to make the answer diverse.
Your knowledge is fine, answer needs to be organized a bit better.
Keep practicing. 🙂
Thanks a lot.
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Naveen
Decent attempt, you have made a mention of the most important tools.
Introduction is fine, article 75 could be mentioned.
In next part, you could explain briefly the various tools(in a few words).
Motion of thanks is missing.
Also, the regular discussion and deliberation process and passing of bills is also a core function of legislature which could be mentioned, especially in passing of bills, role of Rajya Sabha in maintaining checks and balances could be talked about.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Decent attempt, some important points have been covered.
In intro, constitutional article could be mentioned.
In next part, points are fine, along with the explanations. Motion of thanks is missing. While talking about passage of bill, also mention the role of Rajya Sabha in maintaining checks and balances.
Methods of financial control such as budget and role of committed such as PAC should also be mentioned. Point no 4 could be written as censure motion. Certiorari is generally associated with writs.
Further, you could subdivide the points into parliamentary tools,financial control, approval and ratification of bills, loss of confidence etc. for better presentation.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
4.5/10