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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ myanmar-military-tookover- government-a-year-ago-7775644/ - In the intro, mention coup by the military in Myanmar.
- In the body, mention India’s balance towards the situation in Myanmar.
- Next, mention declining popular support to military regime, insurgency at India-Myanmar border, China’s influence etc. In India’s approach mention need to recognise declining support for Army, focusing on relations with PDFs.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to support stability in Myanmar.
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Karun
Decent attempt.
Introduction is good.
Significance part is also fine, you can mention some connectivity projects, some trade figures etc
Approach till now part is also fine.
Write a section on what should be the approach going forward- last line is not sufficient, that can be written in conclusion.
Mention need to recognise declining support for Army, focusing on relations with National Unity Government which enjoys popular support, and developing friendships with groups from People’s Defence Forces as they have shown the capability to resist the military.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Shanmugadevi
Decent attempt. Introduction is good, India’s approach till now has also been clearly written.
Significance part is fine, connectivity projects, trade figures and people to people contact(Free Movement Regime) etc can also be touched upon.
After that too much space has been dedicated to the approach of other countries, you can draw a flowchart and write it briefly.
Then, add a section on what should be the approach of India going forward- this is exclusively asked.
Mention need to recognise declining support for Army within and outside Myanmar, focusing on relations with National Unity Government which enjoys popular support, and developing friendships with groups from People’s Defence Forces as they have shown the capability to resist the military.Last line can be used as conclusion.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Likhitha
The question is regarding India’s approach to the “political situation” in Myanmar, not overall relations.
Introduction is fine, significance is also well written.
After that you have taken a broader view of India-Myanmar relations, not asked.
After significance, you can mention briefly what has been the approach of some other countries like US, China etc towards the situation in Myanmar.
Then, add a section on what should be the approach of India going forward.
Mention need to recognise declining support for Army within and outside Myanmar, focusing on relations with National Unity Government which enjoys popular support, and developing friendships with groups from People’s Defence Forces as they have shown the capability to resist the military.Last line can be used as conclusion.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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