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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/the-stepping- stones-in-the-post-pandemic- world/article37940694.ece - In the intro, briefly mention the various effects of the Covid-19 pandemic.
- In the body, mention areas such as sustainability of growth process, ensuring the robustness of the global supply chains, increasing the competitiveness, adapting to the digital economy and dealing with the challenges of climate change etc.
- In opportunities for India mention India’s role as a trusted partner and suggest improving the investment climate and targeting its export capabilities.
- Conclude by focusing on these areas to make the global economy resilient in the post-Pandemic world.
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Rohit
Good attempt. Intro is fine. In next part also, points are good. You can also mention about the need to cooperate on climate change, adapting to digital economy etc.
Opportunities for India part is also well written. Instead of self-sufficiency, you can mention ‘make in India for the world’. India being a trusted partner for most countries can also be mentioned.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Bhanu
Intro is fine, effects of Covid can be mentioned there only briefly. No need to write separate sub-section.
Rather include more points in areas where global partnership is needed for example climate change, vaccine availability etc. Other points in that part are good, present it nicely.
In opportunities for India you can also mention about taking the space of China in supply chain as the world looks to diversify, improving investment climate, increased need of bilateral and multilateral partnerships etc
Address the core parts of the question well, other things should be written only after that.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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