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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/a- reality-check-on-great-capex- expectations-7704726/ - In the intro, mention the article in the Economist and prediction by Morgan Stanley.
- In the body, mention India’s current situation for India such as falling fixed capital formation, falling capex growth rate for the listed companies, decreasing new projects, low capacity utilisation etc.
- Going by the indication given by these factors you can conclude that capex wave is unlikely to happen in India’s case.
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Nandhini
In intro, you can mention recent reports predicting high capex cycle.
Then mention the overall reasons for such prediction.
Subheading doesn’t match with reasons listed below. After saying doubtful in case of India, you are arguing that how capex is expected to rise.
So better mention reasons for expected rise first, then talk about why it is doubtful.
In next part some points are good, however some points are very generic.
Use some data to enrich the answer.
In reasons for doubt in case of India, you can add some technical points like falling fixed capital formation, falling capex growth rate for the listed companies, decreasing new projects, low capacity utilisation etc
Roll back on reform path etc are good points.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. Go through the article attached for content development. 🙂