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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/how- indias-gati-shakti-plan-can- have-an-impact-beyond-its- borders-7613836/ - In the intro, mention the launch of Gati Shakti plan by the government.
- In the body, describe how the plan aims to upgrade national infrastructure and multimodal connectivity with the multiplier effect with Rs.100 lakh crore plan. In the components mention increase information sharing with a new technology platform between various ministries, giving impetus to multi-modal transportation to reduce logistics’ costs, and analytical decision-making tools to disseminate project-related information and prioritise key infrastructure projects.
- Conclude by mentioning that India can also boost the Gati Shakti plan’s external impact by cooperating more closely with global players.
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Siddharth
Decent attempt. You have more or less covered the crux of the answer.
In components, you can mention information sharing with a new technology platform between various ministries, also impact on logistics cost can be mentioned.
Before concluding mention a bit about external cooperation needed for its success.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Nandhini
Nice attempt. You have covered most of the points. Intro is fine, include some monetary figures while writing about infrastructure plans and its multiplier effects.
Other points are good, challenges mentioned are also fine.
In way forward you can mention about the potential to boost the Gati Shakti plan’s external impact by cooperating more closely with neighboring countries as well as global players as mentioned in the article.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂