Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/make-trade-deals- for-make-in-india/2457320/ - In the intro, mention the government’s plans to encourage manufacturing in India through Make in India program.
- In the body mention the provision of PMPs and PLIs and how these aims to attract investment in India. In the challenges mention the lack of BITs, challenges in providing other factors required for manufacturing, policy hurdles and Preferential Trade Agreements etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to pay attention to the challenges and shortcomings to ensure the success of Make in India.
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Karun
Intro is fine but after that write a bit about PMPs and PLI scheme(to provide context).
After that points in the next part can follow. Points are fine.
Next part on challenges are fine. Some important points like existing zero rates on import duty which might deter companies to shift manufacturing to India and issues with dispute resolution mechanisms in various trade agreements can be mentioned too.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Javed
Introduction is fine, however, you can just introduce PMPs and PLI here. After that write a section on how do they aspire to increase investment in India-low duties on raw materials and intermediate goods, signing of various trade agreements etc along with points mentioned by you.
Challenges part is okay. You can mention about issues with dispute resolution mechanism in various trade agreements, existing low rates of import duty detering manufacturers from shifting base.
Other points are fine.
Try to give a conclusion.
Keep practicing. 🙂